Maria Hoagland, LDS Novelist

Why I Love LDStorymakers Writers Conference

2012-02-28T16:37:00.000-06:00

Why do I love LDStorymakers Writers Conference? Simply put, it's got to be the single most beneficial thing boosting my writing career. What about my degree in English, you wonder. Though it was quite helpful--all that practice writing, meeting deadlines, and being forced to read things I wouldn't normally have--this was more specific to writing fiction. How about my critique group? Well, they're fabulous--the help, the motivation, more deadlines, someone to bounce ideas off of, but where did I meet them? At the writer's conference.

There are certainly many factors that contribute to my writing career: support from my family. A laptop. Time to write. But overall, the biggest motivator has been LDStorymakers Writers Conference. The first time I attended, three years ago, I had a finished manuscript and no idea what to do next. I'd edited (several times), had a friend go through a deep edit (Wow! Great leap forward!) and I was ready to submit, but before I did, I attended the conference. And I was so glad I did.

Why I LOVE LDStorymakers:

There's a place for my genre, LDS women's fiction, and one of the few in the country that gives me an opportunity to meet with other LDS writers and mingle with publishers in the LDS market.
Fabulous classes, anywhere from beginning classes to advanced, from plot and character to self-publishing, from fiction to nonfiction.
Networking. I know people talk about it all the time but I had no idea how important it is. The first time I went, I didn't know anyone. I was coming from Texas, going to Utah, so I knew I would be "on my own." The people were friendly and I enjoyed myself. But it didn't stop there. While there, I signed up for Authors Incognito and that has been the best part ever. The gift that keeps giving: advice, support, critique groups, fresh eyes, and people to sit with at the conference.
Last year, my high school-aged son (who's finished two YA dystopian novels) attended Storymakers with me. As first prize winner of the "Show Your Love" contest, he got a seat at the VIP table where he got to chat with the national authors and agents--which gave him some connections for when he was ready to submit his manuscript (which he has done and is still under review) as well as a much-needed critique from one of the agents. It was such a fabulous opportunity and one he will remember for a very long time. Don't pass up your opportunity to mingle with national agents and authors, check it out here.

So, if you're feeling kinda stuck in your writing career, might I suggest something that not only will invigorate, refresh, and inspire you, but is fun, too? Try the LDStorymakers Conference. You will love it!

QR Blog promotion

2012-02-27T11:29:00.003-06:00

A couple of days ago, I posted a web address for a site that will produce a 3D book cover. I liked the graphics when they were small, but forget about trying to blow it up big enough to use on an 8.5x11 poster. Ugh! Unless you wanna pay $80, and I wasn't that interested. It worked great for the blog, so it has its uses.

Now I found something else. I decided to research if I could get a QR code for book promotion. This website, QR Stuff, was the first one I came across. So far all I entered with this blog address, it generated a QR code for me, I printed it on my computer and voila when I tried it on my iPhone, it worked!! (Okay, maybe I'm easily impressed.)

So as I finish off my book signing posters to send to Book Nook Plus in Nampa, ID and Pioneer Book in Orem, UT, I can include a link that people can follow to read reviews of Nourish & Strengthen, head to my Facebook author page, or visit my blog. Which do you think would be most helpful? What do you look for when following a QR code?

Creating a 3D Book Cover Image

2012-02-25T16:26:00.000-06:00

I just have to share!! I've been trying to cut and paste my book cover image onto a blank book image and having so much trouble. And then I put the "right" words in my search box: "how to make a 3D book cover image free." It all goes back to the whole if-you-want-something-ask-for-it thing. Anyway, using the website I pulled up (3D-Box Maker), I was able to create these beautiful images in seconds!! How's that for awesome!!

A Liebster For Me?? And a Blogger Spotlight?

2012-02-22T11:46:00.001-06:00

How thrilled I was when I received a notification that someone honored my blog with an award! It truly made my day :) Thanks, Rena Traxel! She said my posts are "interesting." Then, the next day I think it was, a friend highlighted my blog in her post, challenging me to the Blogger Spotlight. So take that surprise and fun, and square it. Super fun. Now I know it's kinda like those chain letters we used to get, and it's just a way get some exposure and make some new friends along the way, but I see no harm in it. No threats if you break the chain. I'm not asking for anything in return.

So I'm passing on the love. First, about the Liebster Blog award: I tried to do research to find it's origin, but lost interest after several pages on the Google search. Liebster is said to mean "darling" or "favorite" so that's what we'll go off.

The blogs I now bestow with the Liebster Blog award are as follows: (ahem....)

Shan at Family Brings Joy. She may have more than 200 followers, but I can't tell, and her blog is gorgeous, interesting, and well worth the stop.
Alex at Chaotic Gibberish. He can be interesting when he finds the time to post (high schoolers...think they're busy or something). I think he should get back to his "Autofill" posts--hilarious!
Brooke at Sunshine and Snows in West Texas. Again, don't know about the under 200 requirement. Technicalities. Anyway, she's funny, got a cute family and awesome recipes--well those are located at my next nomination:
There's No Cookin' Like Snow Cookin'. I think I need to try some of these recipes out. Yum!
Jenny at She's Got the Write Stuff. I love that she's reading 100 books this year. That just sounds like an amazing goal!! I hope she makes it.

For the Liebster, I was supposed to say 5 things about me. For the Blog Spotlight, I was supposed to answer 11 questions. I don't feel like playing by the rules, so I'm going to pick and choose. I'm going to be one of those...a cafeteria blogger. So here are the questions I'm going to answer:

1. Canon or Nikon? I have a Canon. Wish I had a good Canon on my iPhone--that would be much more convenient.

2. If you could have one superpower, what would it be? I don't know if it's an official superpower per se, but I'd love to be able to heal.

3. What movie has impacted you recently and why? This Is War--so much so that my husband and I got up and walked out. They took what could have been funny and made it crass and vulgar. Totally unnecessary. Glad it was free. And I guess I need to do a little better research next time.

4. What value is most important to you? {Examples: Commitment, Compassion, Courage, Gratitude, Honesty, Patience, Responsibility, Respect, Work etc.} YES!! Can I say all of the above?

5. What is your favorite ice cream flavor? Finally, an easy one!! Rocky Road :)

OK, Peeps who I tagged. You can either follow the Liebster rules and nominate 5 blogs and say five things about yourself, or you can do the spotlight route with 11 blogs, and 11 questions. Sorry if you didn't like me breaking the rules, but everyone's gotta rebel sometime :)

Review: These Things Hidden & POV

2012-02-14T20:43:00.000-06:00

I'm beginning to wonder if my blog focuses more on reading than writing. I noticed I've done several reviews lately, so I considered not writing this one, but I just couldn't pass it up.

I picked this book up at my local library, along with a couple of other novels, for the express purpose of looking at POV. It was all a research project for me. I'm near the end of my first draft of my second novel and it's a bit different than Nourish & Strengthen. My first novel is written in first person POV, the same one all the way through, but I love books where there are multiple POVs and knew that my second novel needed be written as such.

In the beginning, I wrote each of my three MCs in third person, to keep them straight in my mind if for no other reason at the time. I figured eventually I'd switch them over to first person since everyone says you can relate to a first person character better. As I wrote, there were times I slipped into first person, but not for very long, because it just didn't feel right. So now, as I begin revising, I had a decision to make--or a couple, really: I needed to know if I wanted it first or third person and how long the chapters had to be so that my readers wouldn't get confused with too much head-hopping. Hence, the research.

I know that Jodi Picoult is very popular and she does the multiple POVs quite well, but I wanted to see if a third person, multiple POV novel could work also. When I picked up These Things Hidden by Heather Gudenkauf and flipped through it, I was intrigued to find some characters were first person (Allison and Brynn) and some were third person (Charm and Claire). I needed to know why the author chose to present them that way and how it came off.

Let me just say, Gudenkauf pulls it off well. I don't want to give away any plot points because it was an amazing book and I think anyone interested in contemporary fiction with a little mystery/ suspense thrown in should read it. As I read, I didn't get much of my own revising done because I didn't want to put the book down. "It's research," I justified. And it was. The writing was brilliant. I found that I loved the characters that were in third person just as much as I loved the characters in first--even more so, because of their circumstances--and I got to know their inner thoughts just as well. So many of the things Claire thought and did, I could remember doing or thinking or feeling and it didn't matter that she was written in third person.

Beyond the writing, which was expressive, the plotting was perfect. Even better were the issues. Now days after finishing the book, I find myself thinking about the topics, the characters, and wishing I had more of the story to read. Lucky for me, she's got a book coming out in a few months that looks quite good and I just might have to read her first. (I hesitated with the subject matter; however, she wrote These Things Hidden with grace and good judgement without dipping into the mire of filthiness that much of contemporary fiction slogs through. So I just might try it.)

Thanks to These Things Hidden, I've figured out how I'm going to write my book and I've found a great new-to-me author that I'm excited about.

Review: Donald J. Carey's Bumpy Landings

2012-02-06T12:49:00.001-06:00

I just had to share the latest book I finished reading, Donald J. Carey's Bumpy Landings. I happened to be "researching" one day (okay, I was on Facebook) and saw a link for a book giveaway. I admit, though I'd had my eye on it for a while, I hadn't actually gotten around to buying it yet, so I was interested. I entered and won and within a few days of receiving my copy, I'd devoured it. (Who needs to watch the Super Bowl, right? This was way better!)

The thing that intrigued me the most about Bumpy Landings was that it is a sweet romance written by a guy with a guy's perspective. I thought about it after I finished the book, and I don't really even remember what Heather looks like. If she was described in the book, I might have skipped over that--it's something I tend to do because I want to picture characters my own way--but it hit me that usually when I read a book written in a woman's perspective, physical descriptions seem quite important. Now that's not to say that Carey doesn't use descriptions, he does--I know what everyone else pretty much looks like, I just couldn't remember Heather, and that may just be me. My point is that I enjoyed reading a romance from the guy's POV. It made it interesting to know how a guy thinks when he's trying to get the girl--what's important to him (like the car), his insecurities, his plans.

A couple other things I really liked about this book are the personal connections I could make with it. I've only been to Hawaii once, as a teenager on a high school band trip, so I enjoyed experiencing places I'd seen decades ago. Similarly, I am a BYU-Provo graduate, so it was fun to see how the BYU-H students live compared to what I remembered.

Besides descriptions and my own memories, I enjoyed the story overall. Of course at times, I wanted to yell at Jordan and tell him to stand up for himself, but I knew the time was coming. It was a great read and I recommend it to anyone--in fact, I've passed it off to my teenage daughter who has her high school band trip to Hawaii next year and, hopefully, her own BYU experience another year later.

If you'd like to read a fabulous interview with the author (and where I won my copy of the book) check out Linda Weaver Clarke's blog. In addition, Don Carey's website has some great information including a synopsis of the book, a cute little video trailer, and purchase links. Hop on over and take a look!

Want My Autograph?

2012-02-02T16:18:00.000-06:00

I love opening a new book--being the first to peek into its pages, cradle it in my hands and turn over each leaf, devouring each word. The only thing better is having the author's signature on the title pages. That special personalization that makes it mine. My connection with the author. With the migration to ebooks, is that personal relationship, no matter how slight it was, now gone forever?

I was thrilled to find that there's a way to get your ebooks signed by the author. Check out a site called Kindlegraph. Readers can request a personalized autograph from their favorite author (as long as the author has signed up). And it is totally free--for reader and author. Although the title indicates it's for Kindle products, the site sends a pdf that can be used on any eReader device, so no worries there if you're a Nook supporter or want it on your iPad.

Authors--it's quite easy to set up, the challenge is signing. If you have a tablet, you sign with a stylus or your finger, and sometimes that takes a bit of practice. If you don't have a tablet, you'll find yourself trying to sign with a mouse, which they say is possible, but I'm glad I didn't have to even try.

Anyway, it's great fun, only takes a minute, and is totally free. So why wait? Order your autograph today!

Critique My Blog

2012-02-01T09:40:00.001-06:00

I don't usually ask for criticism. Okay, well, I have been more and more with that picky little writers' critique group of mine (picky in the best sense, of course). But this blog hop looked interesting and helpful, so this is your chance to take a swing at me.

What do you think of my blog? Let me have it! Leave a suggestion or thought in the comment section. Thanks for your help :)

Review: "Family By Design" by Heather Justesen

2012-01-30T00:01:00.000-06:00

I'll start off with my disclaimer: I did receive a "free copy" of this book in exchange for my honest review. Really, it was a pdf of a previous version, so if Heather was trying to bribe me for a favorable review, she'd have to try a little harder. But she didn't need to bribe me, because her writing is good enough to stand alone.

First things first, I must admit, I love this cover. I love the colors and the feeling of home. I think I'd buy this one in paperback, just to have the pretty color (or maybe I need to buy a color eReader).

Here's the back cover blurb:

Before he could think better of it, he blurted out, “I understand your concerns. I’m going to speak to my commander about getting an early discharge. My girlfriend, Rena, and I have talked about getting married. There just hasn’t been any rush.”
As soon as the words were out of his mouth, he wondered what he was thinking. Yes, they had discussed marriage, but not to each other! He and Rena had never even dated.
Tucker’s on his way to the biggest challenge of his life. Rena already has it all—except a family of her own. But neither one expected their friendship would take such a dramatic turn.
When Tucker becomes the guardian of his newly orphaned niece and nephew, he knows he can’t handle them alone, not when he might be shipped out with the Marines at any moment. Desperate, he turns to Rena for a major favor. His marriage proposal would give her everything she wants, but can she learn to live without the romance she’s always dreamed of?
As time, prayer, and a life-changing kiss work a little magic in her heart, Rena wonders if someone up there has a plan for her that’s better than anything she could’ve come up with on her own. And though it seems crazy at first, this could become her chance for a marriage that will last for eternity.
My thoughts: I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book, in fact, because I wasn't reading anything else at the same time (which is unusual), I tried reading slower so it would last--but it didn't work. I had to finish it. However, there is a companion novella that allowed me to continue reading about the characters I'd made a connection with.

Family By Design had an interesting premise which lead to a logical conclusion. It was filled with funny kid stories, real feelings, and lovable characters. Part of me had wanted things to play out a little bit differently, but the turns Heather took it through made the book work. In addition, though I have no family experience with the military, I enjoyed that aspect of Tucker's character and the patriotic sentiments. I am grateful there are people in this country who are willing to sacrifice the way Tucker and Rena do in this book. It almost makes me want to wish this little family well, but they are, after all, fictional.

Also, as a special promotion for anyone who buys a book before January 31, you can get a free ebook for her companion novella, “Shear Luck.” Once you buy a copy of her book go here to get your free copy. I read the novella before I read Family By Design and enjoyed it just as much, so this is a fabulous deal!

As if that weren’t enough, Heather’s holding a host of giveaways on her blog throughout the next few weeks, see the rules at the bottom of this post to enter.

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Interview with Regina Sirois, Author of On Little Wings

2012-01-26T17:35:00.000-06:00

Today I'd like to introduce you to Regina Sirois, author of a new literary novel, On Little Wings, which has had some great success. I was able to interview Regina and here are some of her thoughts.

1. What was your inspiration to write this book?

The seed of this story started as a short story in creative writing in college. It was barely recognizable from the story you see today, but Jennifer's visit to see her Aunt Sarah and meeting a strange boy on the beach remain the same. Over time, I made Jennifer older, wiser, more thoughtful. And over time the mystery haunted me. Why is she there? What happened? Why is her mother so upset? For years I said, "Was it...? Or did she...?" I felt like a detective looking for the story. Every lead I tried was wrong. Until I discovered Claire's pain and realized I solved the mystery. I think that is why I can write Jennifer's feelings of discovery. I just wrote how I felt when I finally got the answers to all line up after years of trying.

2. What is your biggest frustration as a writer?

Where do I start? Self doubt, obviously. I say obviously, because that is my overriding emotion as a writer. I am just skilled enough to know when I stink. And my writing can really be off-base sometimes. I'm just blessed/cursed enough to KNOW it. I can spend hours looking for that one word. Fixing that one sentence. I walk around trying to nod at the right places in conversations but really my brain is on a street in Maine trying to hear what Nathan just muttered. I'm always re-running the movie of my stories in my head to see if I missed anything. I am never quite free... when I write, I get stuck in the words. Does that make sense to anyone?

3. If you had to confess one secret thing about life as a writer, what would it be?

Writers are the bravest yellow-bellied scaredy-cats you will ever meet. They pour out all their talents, thoughts, hopes and dreams onto official paper and then officially hand it out to complete strangers everywhere. That takes guts, people. And then they curl into the fetal position, have a good cry and wish they could slip into a coma before anyone reviews it.

4. What do you want people to take away from your story?

I want people to walk away feeling more thoughtful and intelligent. I want them to feel proud of themselves for pondering some of those big life questions. I want them to feel comforted in the cadence of the words. I want them to feel a part of something wonderful in this hard-scrabble experience that is humanity. I want them to feel endless.

My Review of Regina's Book:

On Little Wings was a fabulous read on several levels. Her descriptions of Nebraska and Maine were lyrical and fresh, each word a delight to savor. In a way, I’d love to go back through the book and collect each unique description of the sun, moon, and sky and string them together just to admire them.

In addition to the descriptions, I loved the way that a reader could either peruse for pleasure, or delve deeper into the intellectual oomph of intense literary dissections and philosophy. Book club discussion leaders for this book could use the “lines” as discussion starters for their groups. (And I'm excited to have picked my book for my book club choice this year!!)

Underneath the elegance of words and the intrigue of ideas is a story exploring love, hurt, and trust. I am thrilled that I stumbled across this book and had the opportunity to read it. Okay, so truth be told, I didn't really stumble across it, several writer friends of mine recommended it, so I had to download it just to check it out and it was totally worth it.

I'm amazed by her self-publishing success story, which has taken quite a turn this week. I will let you discover her fabulous news on her blog. And a few more links: To "Like" her Facebook page. To buy her book on Amazon. Her website.

Review of Nourish & Strengthen by Robbin Peterson

2012-01-23T10:14:00.001-06:00

Hi, readers! Want to know the latest buzz about my novel, Nourish & Strengthen? Robbin Peterson posted her thoughts on her blog. Thanks, Robbin! I always like hearing others' experiences about diabetes and/ or how the book has raised their awareness of the--what do I call it? condition? disease? illness?--way of life.

I have to give a little background on Robbin; I hope she doesn't mind. When I thought my book was done for the final time (I'd gone through many full edits, complete changes, numerous readers and one very thorough and fantastic editor) I asked one last time for volunteer readers to give me their thoughts. Robbin picked it up and gave me exactly what I needed at the time. Thanks to her suggestions, the manuscript went through another, though slighter, transformation, and aside from proofreading changes, brought it to where it is now. (Though if there are any problems, I take full responsibility. Robbin and the others could only do so much.)

A few months later, I was lucky enough to read Robbin's latest manuscript--an LDS novel about a young man coming home from his mission. It thoroughly enjoyed it and can't wait until it gets published. Unfortunately, since it's not out yet, I can't say any more than that. But when it is...

Anyway, thanks, Robbin, you're amazing!

Fiction is...Fiction!

2012-01-21T14:32:00.001-06:00

I've wondered how other writers deal with the question I invariably get--some variation of "Is this a true story?" Usually it's people I know reading my novel, recognizing a situation or detail of their life or someone else we know, and wondering if that character is them. Like I just plucked a friend or family member and dropped them into the story whole. What exactly would the fun of that be? I'm not writing a journal, newspaper article, or church talk here, I'm crafting entertainment. I'm using things I know and twisting them to suit the needs of the story. Kinda why I put "A Novel" on the cover. Not that I mind the question so much if they believe me.

Yet I've still had people come to me with lists..."Chloe is you, obviously, Jordan is so-and-so, Karen Lewis is so-and-so." Not. True. Not even the part that Chloe is me :) Am I diabetic? Yes. Do I have three children? Yes. Do the circumstances surrounding her diagnosis reflect my own? Mostly. So is Chloe Taylor Maria Hoagland? No.

But I digress. This post is about how other writers deal with that issue, and I've happened across two scenarios in the last two days. The first is from House of Diamonds by Karen Jones Gowen. Part of the dedication reads, "To my sisters, who love and support me, and who don't mind me fictionalizing them in my books." The other quote is from John Green's new novel, The Fault in Our Stars. Near the beginning of the book, there is an Author's Note that reads in part, "This is not so much an author's note as an author's reminder of what was printed in small type a few pages ago: This book is a work of fiction. I made it up. Neither novels or their readers benefit from attempts to divine whether any facts hide inside a story." I found that, and the remainder of the Author's Note quite interesting.

Why do we need to know if it is fact or fiction? Why do so many people ask that? Is it important to know? Is it a good thing or a bad thing when it is based on fact but fictionalized?

What do you think?

The image at the top of this post was taken from a website calledpaperbecause.com.

A Vestige of Verbose Verbiage

2012-01-20T10:00:00.002-06:00

Yes, I know that is redundant in a couple of ways.

I thought about writing this entire post in much the same manner as the following mind-blowing YouTube video of John Branyan's "The Three Little Pigs," but I decided not to steal his thunder. Watch and enjoy the flurry of words by a master entertainer.

What do you think? Should we start speaking like that again? If nothing else, it makes me want to attend a Shakespeare play, but since that only happens in September around here, I'll settle for wearing my Utah Shakespeare Festival T-shirt instead.

A Low Blood Sugar Epiphany

2012-01-14T16:30:00.001-06:00

The weather was gorgeous and I didn't want to pass up an opportunity to run in shorts and short sleeves. And I had a few free hours. But when I checked my blood sugar it was on the low side of normal--79. Usually I like to start running at 150, or right after eating (and taking less insulin than necessary) so that I will have adequate energy the entire time I'm out. So I ate a snack, lowered my basal rate to 60%, and headed out.

I only got about a mile before I knew it was low again. I'd forgotten to add a snack to my Spibelt, but I figured the snack I ate before leaving the house would eventually catch up to me, so I walked for a while, figuring I could run more in a few minutes.

Long story short, my blood sugar never came up enough to run (when I got home it was at 65) but I had a very productive session. As you can see from my sidebar WIP meter, I'm about 87% done with my first draft of my second book, but I had a couple of problems I had to figure out before I could move on. For some reason, I couldn't figure out a couple of characters' professions and it was becoming important to the story. I couldn't figure out exactly how to mesh the multiple POVs so that the reader didn't have to head hop too much, but yet I'd be able to further each character's arc as they each had shared experiences. And most of all, I needed a stellar beginning. One to grab the reader by the throat and say, "Stick with me here, it'll be worth your while."

And that's what I figured out during my "run" today. I was able to answer all those questions that had been holding me back. I was thrilled. So although low blood sugar isn't conducive to running, it sure helped me get the ideas I needed to further my book!

What unusual circumstances have you been in when you had your epiphanies?

I Need to Get Working But I'm in my PJs

2012-01-13T10:40:00.001-06:00

First off, no, this is NOT a picture of me. I'm not sure I even look this good right now, so I'll spare you the visual. But you have an idea.

It's 10:30 in the morning and my day off from work. I've got a ton to do for my church calling, volunteer assignment with the high school band boosters (we got new uniforms and I'm in charge of organizing, unpacking, hanging up, assigning, moving out old ones, the list goes on and on, but my muscles scream STOP), running, and oh yeah, housework. Yet here I am online.

It's because when I ate breakfast this morning, I started reading a book on my Kindle. An indie published book by someone who has had an amazing rise to popularity. In not quite ten days she went from obscurity to the top of Kindle's literary fiction list, right up there with The Help and Like Water for Elephants. Now if you're wondering which book I'm talking about, I'm reserving that little fact for a later date...maybe I'll blog about her book when I finish. Besides, although I am supremely, genuinely ecstatic for her, that's not the point.

Instead, I'm musing about luck and skill and playing the game right. I'm thinking about hard work and the definition of success. I'm remembering what my goals were and why I published in the first place (and it wasn't for fame or riches, though I'd turn neither down). I'm pondering the role of mentors and trail blazers, cheerleaders and support groups. I'm reveling in making my dream come true.

A couple of weeks ago I had one of my top ten life experiences. I had the opportunity to have a book signing...MY book signing...in a real bookstore, surrounded by supportive family, friends who drove hours to be with me, and complete strangers who bought my book. I was on top of the world. My high school best friend mentioned how happy she was for me in fulfilling my dream and it made me stop and think about it a lot over the past few weeks. I had put hours, years, into my book--editing, rewriting, over and over and then I took a chance and laid it out there for anyone to read. And it was a dream come true.

I'm glad I did it. I'm happy that I've had the experience of having readers tell me how my book has touched them. And I'm excited that I still take time to sit in my pajamas and do something I love every day. That's got to be the secret definition of success.

What is your definition of success?

Review: "Out of My Mind" by Sharon M. Draper

2012-01-06T09:50:00.001-06:00

The book sat on my coffee table along with a few others due back at the library. I don't usually read everything my children do--honestly, I don't have the time. They read so many books. (A nice quandary to be in.) But I had to read this one. Both of my high school children had recommended it and the cover was intriguing, so I cracked it open to the first chapter. I was hooked. The words slipped around me like poetry. I'd have to put this first chapter on my top five list of all time.

As a writer of women's fiction, I don't often read middle grade fiction, but this book has changed my life. Or I hope it has. My family's experience with type 1 diabetes has taught me about being physically different than other people. There are few limitations but many misconceptions about living with the disease, and I felt I could empathize, if only slightly. Melody's story opened my eyes, my heart, and gotten me thinking. I will be forever grateful I read this book.

And in case you'd like to check it out, here's a link to the author's blog and official website. And here's a link to my son's review...the one who said I had to read it.

Have you read this book? Let me know what you thought.

Review of Nourish & Strengthen on Mormon Mommy Writers

2011-12-31T18:18:00.001-06:00

What a great way to finish 2011! Friday I had my very first book signing. It was at Moon's LDS Bookstore in Dallas. The staff was wonderful, the store pleasant, the clientele fun to meet. It was a fabulous experience!! If you're in the area, they still have a couple copies of Nourish & Strengthen for sale.

Then, Saturday, Lisa Turner on Mormon Mommy Writers posted a review of Nourish & Strengthen. Her thoughts were insightful and honest. It's always so fun for me to read what people think of my book, especially of course, when they like the novel. Head on over to Mormon Mommy Writers to read the review, and leave your opinion!

My thanks to Lisa and Moon's Bookstore, and a Happy New Year to everyone!

Review of Tristi Pinkston's Season of Sacrifice

2011-12-26T16:54:00.000-06:00

Book Description:
A story of love, trial, and sacrifice, Season of Sacrifice takes you on the journey through the Hole in the Rock with the early Mormon pioneers. Historical fiction at its finest by award-winning author Tristi Pinkston.

Sarah Williams is a young Welsh immigrant, coming to Utah to join her sister Mary Ann Perkins and her young family. When the Perkins' are asked to join the San Juan mission to pioneer a trail through Southern Utah, they take Sarah along to help care for the children. But a six-week journey turns into six agonizing months of hard work and toil as the Saints blast their way through a cliff to bring their wagons through what would become the famous Utah landmark "Hole in the Rock." This LDS historical fiction novel is based on the life of the author's great-great-grandfather and accurately depicts the experiences of these intrepid pioneers as they sought to be obedient to a higher call.

My Thoughts:
When I drive throughSouthern Utah in the comfort of my heated/ air-conditioned SUV--with gas stations and fast food stopsalong the way--I sometimes wonder what it might have been like tobe the first to forge through the barren wilderness, blasting through rock andfashioning roads to get where to a desired destination. I had some idea what that might have been like, but reading Season of Sacrifice brought it to life for me and taught me along the way. (I was amazed by the engineering feats, and found Sarah's introduction to bananas hilarious!) The descriptions of these early Mormon pioneers' struggles and triumphs were interesting in their own right, but absolutely necessary as the book continued on. Their hard life as well as their physical and social constraints lead me to a point where I could understand a little more how the people might have been able to accept some of the hardest of commandments.

The characters in Season ofSacrifice had to endure much, yet I appreciated the way these characters werewritten, with humor and trepidation, faith and forgiveness, and a strong love of their Savior, Jesus Christ. I have never read a more beautiful and understanding description of their sacrifice. It was thought-provoking, yet delicate. Season of Sacrifice is a book of triumph and perseverance.

To purchase Season of Sacrifice in any eBook version, click here. In addition, it can be found at Amazon.com in paper and Kindle versions. If you'd like to learn more about Tristi, check out her blog--it's always great fun!

Writing a Silent Night

2011-12-24T21:48:00.000-06:00

The last few days I've been wondering what non-LDS people think when they read Nourish & Strengthen. The main character, Chloe, is a member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints and believes Jesus Christ to be her Savior and Redeemer. In fact, this is so much a part of her, it never is a question in the book. She has many struggles, but never that. Her questions of faith have more to do with trying to measure up, to be good enough to qualify for God's grace--which we all know we can never earn. She toils to overcome the temptation to judge. She works to show charity, the pure love of Christ, to herself and others in her life. Through it all, she remains firm in her conviction that Jesus Christ is the One who makes it possible for her to repent and improve.

The thing is, I didn't want my novel to be preachy. If I remember correctly, I don't quote scripture...at least not in an "a-ha" moment or turning point for her...and I wonder if my friends from other Christian religions might find that as a fault. I wonder if they wonder how I, as the author, feel about God the Father and His Son, Jesus Christ.

At this most holy of days, I ponder on the miracle of the Savior's birth. I picture what it might have been like to be there, but more than that, tears come to my eyes as I think about the love that He has for me and for all mankind. I am grateful for the gift of the Savior and wish all of us peace at this time of year as we come a little closer to God through His Son.

I wish all a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year!

COLD RIVER by Liz Adair: Add a Little Sunshine to Winter

2011-12-20T00:36:00.001-06:00

If you're feeling a little dreary with the winter blues, a little ray of sunshine is no farther than Liz Adair's new romantic suspense novel, Cold River. The synopsis from the back book cover reads:

"Mandy Steenburg thinks her doctorate in education has prepared her to run any school district - until she tangles with the moonshine-making, coon-dog-owning denizens of a tiny district in Pacific Northwest timber country. She's determined to make a difference, but the local populace still looks to the former superintendent for leadership. When Mandy lands in the middle of an old feud and someone keeps trying to kill her, instinct tells her to run. And though she has to literally swim through perilous waters, she finds a reason to stay and chance the odds."

My thoughts:
I thoroughly enjoyed this book! It's the first I've read of Liz's novels, but after reading Cold River, I will definitely reach for more. I loved the alternative sunshine in an otherwise rainy, gray environment. I related well to the main character and found myself literally cheering her on in chapter 28. I liked the love triangle and enjoyed Mandy's paradigm shift near the end. The writing was impeccable, the characters so well-rounded I wondered if they were my neighbors. was a believable, enjoyable read and perfect for cuddling up with next the fire this winter!

To learn more about the author, head on over to her blog, or if you'd like to order your own copy of Liz Adair's Cold River check out this link.

Winner of Nourish & Strengthen

2011-12-16T14:11:00.001-06:00

Thank you to everyone who participated in the Give Books Giveaway Hop!! It was great fun and I got some good suggestions of books to read and give away!

After randomly selecting a website to do my random number selection for the entries on this blog, the winner is Roberta! Please email me or contact me with a mailing address and I will be sure to ship off your very own copy of my novel, Nourish & Strengthen.

Happy reading and Merry Christmas!

Tristi Pinkston's Review of Nourish & Strengthen

2011-12-08T15:12:00.001-06:00

Another review of Nourish & Strengthen has come out today, this one written by LDS author, Tristi Pinkston. I was super excited that Tristi agreed to review my novel because she's got amazing taste and is pretty well known in the LDS writing scene.

Head on over to her blog if you'd like to read her reaction to Nourish & Strengthen. Of course, my favorite part had to be the part when she complimented my book's tone and voice. Thanks, Tristi!

Eclectic Books: Giving Books for Christmas

2011-12-05T12:32:00.001-06:00

Are you someone who loves giving books for Christmas, but need a few ideas? "Flip" through this holiday catalog to find some great books by new and established authors. And the great thing about it? They're all clean, family-friendly books, so even if you've never read them before, you can feel confident in gifting them to all your loved ones!

A Gift to the World

2011-12-05T10:37:00.001-06:00

This Christmas season as we remember the wonderful gift of our Savior to the world, The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints has made this new video available. These scenes, depicted straight from the King James version of the Holy Bible, really touched me when I watched them for the first time last night and I wanted to share them with you.

Merry Christmas to everyone, and may I share my love for the Savior at this very special season.

Who Doesn't Love Books for Christmas?

2011-12-01T07:59:00.000-06:00

I'm participating in the Give Books for Christmas Giveaway Hop, hosted by Inksplasher. If you're unfamiliar with a blog hop--it's pretty easy and pretty cool: Just follow the directions below to be entered to win a book on each blog. That's a lot of books!!

The hop runs from December 1 through the 15th. All books will be shipped on December 16th. We can't guarantee books will arrive in time for Christmas, but we're going to give it a good try!

At the end of this post, you'll see a long list of the participating blogs. Just click the links and go check out the contests.

I'm giving away a copy of my novel, Nourish & Strengthen. It's LDS women's fiction. Click here to read a synopsis.

Open to US addresses and please include your email address so I can contact you as soon as you win!

Deadline to enter: Thursday, December 15, 2011.

To enter to win this book:

Become a follower of my blog
Leave a comment telling me the title and author of a book you're giving as a Christmas gift this year.
Optional: Tweet or Facebook to spread the word. (Let me know in the comments what you've done. One extra entry per post. Maximum entries, 3.)

That's it! The winner will be posted and notified at the end of the hop.

My Accounting: BIAM

2011-11-30T21:53:00.001-06:00

If you've been on writing blogs at all this month, you've probably heard all about NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month). Last year I signed up for it and wrote maybe a couple thousand words. Maybe. I had high hopes, but I was in the middle of editing, so it just didn't happen. This year I knew better. I was releasing a book on Nov. 1, so other than promotion, I was good there. The thing was, I was probably a third into my next book and I didn't want to start from scratch as NaNo rules stipulate.

So I found a program that would work for me. ANWA (American Night Writers Association) was running BIAM (Book in a Month) where you could set your own goal (instead of NaNo's 50K) and work on a previously started project. Perfect!

This year I wrote a total of 36,076 words. Not bad, considering I started at just over 30K. So I doubled my book, filling in most of the major scenes. I know my word count will go up as I edit because by the end, I knew a lot more about my characters than I did when I started, so I have more details to fill in--and an entire subplot I didn't think about until two days ago.

Why did it work so well for me this year? First off, I was in the perfect position to need a new book. Second, there was so much support from my other writer friends, whether they were doing NaNo or BIAM, it was great to be accountable and report my daily word count as well as hear how everyone else was doing.

So tomorrow starts December--time to take a deep breath, get out of a writer's frenzy, and prepare for editing and filling in holes. But at least now I have something to work with.

I am Thankful...

2011-11-22T17:14:00.001-06:00

What I am thankful for this year:

1. My family. They truly are wonderful.
2. My friends. They are, too.
3. My faith. I would be lost without it.
4. My health. And the health of my children. A new endocrinologist, medicine and insurance.
5. Jobs, house, community. (Trying to make sure this list doesn't get too long!)
6. The opportunity to go to the mountains and a quiet cabin for Thanksgiving.
7. Fall leaves, Christmas songs in the grocery store, cooler weather, and the memory of snowfalls without the slush.
8. The ability to run. I guess I'm an endorphin junky.
9. High speed Internet :) And music--all kinds. And good food. (It's hard to keep it to 10.)
10. Finally having my book out, getting some great reviews, and having people buy it! And working on the next book and finding out I still enjoy writing.

This is such a short list of the blessings God has given me, and I know I could never list them all. I hope all of you have a wonderful Thanksgiving!

Interview with RaShelle Workman, Author of Exiled

2011-11-16T17:07:00.001-06:00

Maria: Hi, RaShelle, thanks for taking time out of your busyschedule to appear on my blog. Congrats on your new book.

RaShelle: Thanks, Maria. Right backatcha. I’m glad tobe here.

Maria: So tell me a little about the process you wentthrough to publish.

RaShelle: Getting EXILED out foreveryone’s reading pleasure *giggles* took lots and lots of editing. Rewriting.Praying. And finding the right people to release with – Christine Bryant andAli Cross.

Maria: That sure sounds like a lot of work!

RaShelle: It was, but it’s beenawesome. I’ve received emails from fans requesting copies of my book fromMalaysia to Japan to Canada to Africa! - which is totally cool and makeswriting all the more fun for me.

Maria: You have such a beautiful cover for Exiled, and it’s even won some acclaim.Would you like to tell us about it? Who designed it and how?

RaShelle: EXILED has won a CoverWar or two. It’s been fun.

As for how the cover came intobeing, I wanted something special, but I wasn’t sure what until I saw it. WhenI found the picture of the girl with butterflies in her hair, I KNEW that wasit. Then I submitted the pic to thegenius, Steven Novak, and he ran with it.

Maria: Why butterflies? Does it represent somethingparticular?

RaShelle: The butterfliesrepresent Venus and her peoples’ metamorphosis. At the age of sixteen, theytransform into immortals, just as a caterpillar transforms into abutterfly. The butterflies on the coverare “captured” in worlds, which represents her exile, or being trapped onEarth.

Maria: Tell us a little more about your book.

RaShelle: Quite simply, it’sabout an alien princess (Venus) born to lead and the arrogant boy (Michael)born to love her.

Now does it work out that way…well, you’ll have to read it to find out. LOL

Maria: The premise sounds quite interesting. Where did youget the inspiration for it?

RaShelle: I LOVE romance – firstand foremost. And I’ve always believed we aren’t alone in the Universe. I’vealso always believed that there would be “others” (aliens) who would look likeus (cuz, why not). So I had this idea for several years about a guy fromanother planet who is sent to Earth to destroy the inhabitants so that hispeople could take over. Over the years it developed into EXILED (book 1),BEGUILED (book 2) and DOVETAILED (book 3).

Maria: I especially love the boots!

RaShelle: So do I. I really wanta pair. I dreamed the boots! And know someone who knows someone who may be ableto make the boots happen. If it does, I’ll let you know.

Maria: Ooh! Please do! One of my favorite things to find outabout authors is…what their writing process is and if they have a particularquirk. What do you do when you’re writing? Do you munch on M&Ms, have aglass of Gatorade on hand, keep your puppy asleep on your toes, listen to rap?

RaShelle: I am a big-timeplanner. So once the planning is done, I just sit down and type and type andtype.

Maria: You sound very dedicated. Is there anything else you’dlike to tell our readers?

RaShelle: Mmmm, I hope they enjoy reading as much as Ienjoyed writing. I hope it makes them happy and think and ponder and… have ablast!

Maria: Good luck! It’s a great book and I know anyone whoreads it will enjoy it immensely.

RaShelle: Awwww, thanks Maria.

If I've piqued your interest, here are some links to get you a closer look:

RaShelle Workman's Blog

All e-Book Versions

Kindle Version

Nook Version

And if that wasn't enough to get you interested, try watching the trailer:

My Therapy Session with "Dr." Shelly Brown

2011-11-16T09:37:00.001-06:00

You know, being a writer, I'm tormented by the voices in my head, but fortunately there's someone out there that takes the plight of authors seriously and that is Shelly Brown.

Take a peek at my therapy hour (AKA interview about Nourish & Strengthen) on her hilarious blog! I had a lot of fun working with her--and you'll find, it's a fun spin on an interview. Thanks, Shelly!

Diabetes: Would You Want to Know?

2011-11-14T10:55:00.001-06:00

Today is World Diabetes Day. With four out of five people in my household living with type 1 diabetes, I think about it a lot. Dinners always end with, "How much insulin should I take?" or "Did everyone remember to take insulin?" I always smile when my 17-year-old son, the only one with a functioning pancreas, answers "yes" to that question. Yesterday, he had fun figuring out how much insulin his little brother should take for Sunday dinner (not an easy thing to figure out sometimes) and I thought he guessed pretty well. Maybe if he knows enough about it, he won't have to have that challenge in his life. But surely if he does, he will be prepared.

But in thinking about him, the only one of my three children who doesn't have it, I wonder about this trial I heard on the radio--a public service announcement by Nick Jonas. When the first of my children was diagnosed, I was asked if we wanted to have the other two screened to find out if they had a higher chance of developing the disease within the next ten years. My first question was, "Can it be prevented?" When they told me no, I decided I didn't want to know if they couldn't do anything about it. And three years later the next one was diagnosed.

But now it sounds like there are some trials going on to prevent the development of type 1 diabetes. So I have to re-evaluate my decision. Do I want to know if he will develop it? Can it be prevented? Would being a part of the trial cause or speed up the onset? If I don't do anything and he develops diabetes, will I forever wonder if I could have prevented it?

Do any of you have any experience with this? Any advice?

Nourish & Strengthen Review by Melissa Lemon

2011-11-10T19:37:00.001-06:00

I wanted to let you know about a review of my novel, Nourish & Strengthen. I think Melissa Lemon summed it up quite well and I appreciate her thoughts on it. To tell the truth, I was a little afraid when I read the first line and thought, "This is either really bad or pretty good..." It sure got my heart beating fast!

Thanks, Melissa, for taking the time to read and review it! Glad to know you enjoyed Nourish & Strengthen. I can't wait to read your book now. It sounds fascinating!

BIAM and Losing My Balance

2011-11-09T11:02:00.001-06:00

Last year I signed up for NaNo. And failed. Terribly. This year, I decided I'd better be a little more realistic. With a book launch keeping me busy and a half-finished first draft of my second novel to finish, I didn't want to follow the rules of Nano. Instead I decided to take the BIAM challenge. I'm doing okay. Getting more words every day. But the biggest thing is that I'm writing and LOVING it! I started using Scrivener and I feel so free. I'm not tied to a strict linear process anymore, but writing whichever scene strikes me at the time. I hope I don't live to regret it, since some of the scenes I'm writing I don't even know where they will end up in the outline, but I think I'll use them. I hope Scrivener works out and that I don't lose everything.

However, there's a slight problem with doing BIAM. I found yesterday, that I'm spending every possible second writing and not taking care of the daily things I need to--like checking my calendar. Didn't realize it was the 2nd Tuesday and missed an important meeting. I'm pretty sure I need to go to the grocery store, but I don't want to check because I don't want to be held responsible to do so. And the biggest--I signed up to do a blog hop and missed the deadline because somehow I thought it was the next day. Ugh.

Anyway, I am late, but I am finally announcing the winner of my Nourish & Strengthen Book Launch Giveaway...

The Winner Is...ASHLEIGH!!

I hope you love the books you receive: Nourish & Strengthen...by me:) and Called To Serve Again by Jeffrey Olsen!!

Congrats and I'll contact you :)

Thanks to everyone who participated. Now back to writing......

Diabetic Service Dogs

2011-11-07T09:31:00.000-06:00

Since it's National Diabetes Awareness Month, I've been doing a little poking around the internet (not too much because there's so much out there and it could eat up all my time) about diabetes. I know a little about the disease--my husband and I and two of our three children have type 1 diabetes and both my parents are type 2--but I can always learn more.

I'd heard about service dogs for type 1 diabetics, and thought I'd read up on it a little. These great dogs are trained to recognize swift changes in blood sugar and alert the owner of these changes to prevent loss of consciousness and other complications. It's amazing how they're trained to notice not only when it's going up or down, but when it is under a certain number or over another. What I really like is that they will wake the owner when this happens during the night. I admit, my kids seem to be pretty good at recognizing hypoglycemia (lows) on their own during the day (great excuse to get food) but I worry they won't be able to drag themselves out of sleep during the night when those crazy food dreams start--the way my body at least, tries to alert me of low blood sugar during the night. It looks like service dogs are a great help for diabetic families. I think I'd especially get one if I had a baby or toddler with diabetes since they can't recognize the feelings or communicate them well enough on their own.

I'm thinking it'd be great to get a service dog/ running partner. That's when I have the hardest time "feeling" the highs and lows--or at least differentiating between running fatigue because I'm out of shape or because I have low blood sugar. To have a dog that could run with me and be able to help me do that would be awesome!! Now if I could only get a service dog to sniff out when my son hasn't finished his homework....

If you'd like to read more about service dogs for diabetics, Dogs4Diabetics seems to be one of the bigger trainers. Also, check out the article "Could a Dog Save Your Life" or the article about the girl and dog in the above picture.

Oh, and one more thing...my Book Launch Giveaway is going on for two more days. Check this out to enter.

What They're Saying About Nourish & Strengthen

2011-11-04T09:52:00.000-05:00

In case you're looking for some news about how Nourish & Strengthen is resonating with readers, check out a few of these reviews/ links:

Jenny Moore's blog: The Write Stuff
Carolyn Frank's blog: Frankly Creative
Amazon Reviews
Smashwords Review

My thanks to everyone who's reviewed it so far. There are many more to come. And by the way, my giveaway contest is still underway, just scroll down!

Book Launch and Giveaway! for Nourish & Strengthen

2011-11-01T08:40:00.001-05:00

Welcome to the virtual launch of two new LDS novels: Nourish & Strengthen by Maria Hoagland (me!) and Called to Serve Again by Jeffrey Olsen.

To celebrate, Jeff and I are each giving away a copy of our books--so on this blog, one lucky winner will win the bundle pack of my book and Jeff's. And I'm pretty sure on his blog, you can sign up to win there, too.

To win on my blog is simple:
1. You must live in the United States. (Sorry, I do love my international readers, but I can't do the shipping, unless you want an ebook.)
2. For one chance in the hat, be a Follower of my blog and leave a comment on this post.
3. For another chance, "Like" my Facebook page.
4. For more chances to win--blog, tweet, or Facebook about my book, Nourish & Strengthen.
5. In the comment section of this post, tell me how many times your name should be entered (we're on the honor code here).

The contest will run through Nov. 7 when I will post the winner. Please make sure I can get in touch with you so I can get a mailing address for your prize.

Now go out and spread the word about Nourish & Strengthen and Called to Serve Again. Let others know how excited you are to read these books. Copies are now for sale: in paperback or ebook, and on Amazon.com. And if you liked Nourish & Strengthen, I'd love to be nominated for a Whitney Award :)

Thanks and happy reading!

My First Review!!

2011-10-25T00:22:00.002-05:00

I just had to share...my first review of Nourish & Strengthen is up!! Check out this adorable blog and all the great things she has to say about my book. Thanks, Brooke! (And I didn't even pay her to say it.) While you're there, take a peek at her photography! Isn't she fabulous?

Redecorating!

2011-10-25T00:11:00.001-05:00

Every once in a while I feel an urgent need to redecorate. During the first few years of marriage, it was probably every month. I think that might have been due to cramped living quarters that I was always trying to make just a little better--like a puzzle that would suddenly make sense if all the pieces were in the correct order. Over the years, I've overcome the urge...or maybe just redirected it. So here I am, preparing for the Big Book Launch next week and have overhauled my blog. What do you think? Is there anything that just doesn't seem right?

Review: The Alias

2011-10-17T19:59:00.002-05:00

Would you become someone else to save your son? How far would you go? Explore what it might be like with Mandi Tucker Slack's new book, The Alias. I, too, wanted to follow Jacey Grayson as she attempted to escape from her own personal dangers in the big city to the idyllic peacefulness of the countryside: Life was slower, the landscape beautiful, and the food so good, I could almost taste it. (Let me tell you, I was always hungry while I was reading this book!) Click here if you'd like to read the official synopsis.

The Alias was a fun read with a little suspense and a little romance and thoroughly enjoyable. Not only that, but it was clean enough to pass off to my teenage daughter--which if you've read any of my other reviews, is high on my priority list. I would definitely recommend this book.

The Alias by Mandi Tucker Slack can be found for a good deal at Amazon and is a steal on Kindle for only $3.99. To learn more about the author, check out her website or blog.

October Blog Hop

2011-10-13T11:27:00.003-05:00

Welcome to the October Blog Hop, where you can visit new blogs, enter to win prizes, and have a great time! At the bottom of this post, you'll see a list of participating blogs. Just click on each link, check out the prize, and follow the easy instructions to enter. You can enter on each blog, so it's possible to win multiple times. It's frighteningly easy.

On this blog, you can win ...

My awesome prize: a copy of my new novel, Nourish & Strengthen! It's not scheduled to be released until November 1st, but I'll do all I can to get you an advance, SIGNED copy!! To enter, all you need to do is:

1. Become a follower of my blog.

2. Leave a comment on this post and tell me why you'd like to win this prize. If your e-mail address isn't visible through your Blogger profile, please also leave it with the comment so I can notify you if you win. You can enter until midnight MST on Saturday night, October 15th.

That's it! You are now entered. Now please go visit all my friends on the list below. It's almost like trick or treating!
October Blog Hop Participants

1. Tristi Pinkston
2. I Am a Reader, Not a Writer
3. Bonnie Harris
4. Michael D. Young
5. Misty Moncur
6. Debbie Davis
7. Mandi Tucker Slack
8. Mary Ann Dennis
9. Deanna Henderson
10. Laura Bastian
11. Kristy Tate

12. Kristy Wilson
13. Jennifer Debenham
14. Jenny Moore
15. Elizabeth Hughes
16. J. Lloyd Morgan
17. Close Encounters with the Night Kind
18. Billy Boulden
19. Scott Bryan
20. Maria Hoagland
21. Shirley Bahlmann
22. Shelly Brown

23. Marcy Howes
24. Lynnea Mortensen
25. Jaclyn M. Hawkes
26. Diane Stringam Tolley
27. Gail Zuniga
28. Betsy Love
29. iWriteNetwork
30. Canda's InkBlast
31. Stacy Coles

Learn more about October Blog Hop here.
View More October Blog Hop Participants
Get The Code

October Blog Hop

2011-10-13T10:49:00.001-05:00

While I try to iron out the bugs and get the October Blog Hop up and running, you can use this post as the entry.

My awesome prize: a copy of my new novel, Nourish & Strengthen! It's not scheduled to be released until November 1st, but I'll do all I can to get you an advance, SIGNED copy!!

All you have to do is be a follower on my blog and leave a comment on this or the official blog post when I get it up and running. Please make sure I have your email address so I can get in touch with you when you win!

I Did It!

2011-10-07T10:43:00.002-05:00

I did it! I did it! I did it!

Can't tell I'm excited, can you? Really what it came down to was finding the right terms to place in the Google search engine, but I found some very helpful blogs and was able to make the Twitter and Facebook follow buttons/ links I wanted!

Thanks to these very informative articles: How To Make Your Own Blogger Buttons and Resizing Images

Just Five More Minutes!

2011-10-06T13:40:00.002-05:00

“Time to go,” I tell my eleven-year-old son. His response? Invariably it's, “Aw…just fivemore minutes.”

It seems everything in my life right now boils down toneeding just five more minutes. I can’t tell you how many times I’ve almostbeen late to work recently (and I’m someone who HATES to be late to anything)because I’ve been involved in something that will take me just a couple moreminutes to complete. Reading a chapter in a book, folding the last load oflaundry, chatting with a friend.

But I admit, usually it has to do with a computer. YesterdayI was trying to figure out how to connect these cute Twitter and Facebook iconsI found. As you see from the side of my blog, I’ve somewhat successfully doneit once (go ahead—try them out J,though I need to figure out how to position them side by side), but this time Ifound these book shapes and figured they'd fit thematically. I knew ifI clicked on just the right site, it would include the HTML code or explain indummy terms how to connect it. Just one more click. Which becomes twenty, whicheasily becomes five more minutes.

What is the thing that keeps you stuck for justfive more minutes? Oh, and if you know how to solve my technical issue, feelfree to leave me a link or explanation. I’d really appreciate it.

Joy in Butterflies

2011-09-28T10:21:00.000-05:00

I passed another 100 mile mark! With my short 5K this morning, I have now officially run over 300 miles in 2011!

Honestly, I hadn't paid attention to where I was on my WIP meter (see right side bar) since I've been nursing a strain somewhere in my hip area, a yucky cold, and a hankering for painting my kitchen which effectively kept me from running most of the past week. But this morning I happened to be checking out a friend's blog and saw his updates from races and realized that if I want to run at the end of next month, I've got to keep at it. No more time off!!

And I was so glad I did. Not only did I make it to 300 miles (which I didn't know until I sat down to write this post) but I was able to enjoy gorgeous blue skies instead of just a computer screen, invigorating fragrances native to West Texas (I wish I knew what they were), and Monarch butterflies. Two ran right into me, one of them almost as big as my hand. It made me happy and grateful. As I read with the kids this morning before sending them off to school, "Men are that they might have joy." There is much in my life to bring me joy and today it was running and butterflies.

September Blog Hop

2011-09-22T18:34:00.001-05:00

Welcome to the September Blog Hop! Celebrate the beginning of fall with me and my blogger friends by hopping around, visiting our sites, and entering our contests! There are no limits - you can enter the contest on every blog. With over 40 blogs participating, that's over 40 prizes you could win. Just click on the links below to move on to the next blog.

On my blog, you can win …

An author-signed copy of All Diets Work: That's the Problem by Jen Brewer, RD

Would you like to win this prize? You just need to do two things. 1. Become a follower of this blog. 2. Leave me a comment in the trail and tell me why you'd like to win this prize. That's it! You are now entered. The contest ends on Saturday night, September 24th, at midnight MST, and the winner will be contacted shortly thereafter. Please either leave your e-mail address in the comment trail or make sure it's visible through your profile so I can contact you to tell you that you're the lucky winner. Now go visit my other friends ... September Blog Hop Participants

1. Tristi Pinkston, LDS Author2. Joyce DiPastena3. I Am A Reader, Not A Writer4. Mandi Slack5. Michael D. Young6. Six Mixed Reviews7. Pam Williams8. Laurie Lewis9. Kristy Tate10. Marilyn Yarbrough11. Stacy Coles12. Kristie Ballard13. Lynn Parsons14. Pushing Past the Pounds15. Sheila Staley16. cindy Hogan

17. Jamie Thompson18. Jaclyn Weist19. Cathy Witbeck20. Secret Sisters Mysteries21. Tamera Westhoff22. Tina Scott23. Lynnea Mortensen24. Danyelle Ferguson aka Queen of the Clan25. Jeanette A. Fratto26. Bonnie Harris27. Melissa Lemon28. Mary Ann Dennis29. Stephanie Black30. Jane Still31. Janice 32. Laura Bastian

33. Tamara Bordon34. Betsy Love35. Maria Hoagland36. Amber Robertson37. Debbie Davis38. 39. Christy Monson40. Carolyn Frank41. Rebecca Birkin42. Melissa Cunningham43. Emily L. Moir44. Ronda Hinrichsen45. Lisa Asanuma46. Joan Sowards47. Jordan McCollum48. Diane Stringam Tolley

Learn more about September Blog Hop here.Get The Code

What Happens In Vegas...Gets Posted In Blogger

2011-09-21T10:13:00.000-05:00

Hey, guess what? I'm going to Vegas with my sweetie. Well, I'm going to Vegas...he's going to work, and we may see each other for a few hours every once in a while. Thing is, since I'm LDS, the typical attractions on the Strip--mainly the gambling, drinking, and questionable shows--don't appeal to me.

That's where you come in. I need some suggestions of fun, clean things to do on my adventure. Leave me a comment and/or a link with suggestions and then while I'm there, I'll Tweet about my trip as it happens and follow up with a post. Thanks for your help!

Teamwork

2011-09-13T10:03:00.003-05:00

I spent all morning yesterday on the phone setting up appointments,canceling appointments, being shuffled from office to office. I’m embarrassedto admit it included a few tears and a little frustration, somemisunderstanding and a well-timed fax offering the elusive solution. And Irealized that finding the right endocrinology team is akin to finding the right critique group, or music instructors, or personal trainers, orwhatever you want to do the very best at.

I’m one of those people who prides myself in doing things onmy own. In fact, I spent last week refinishing my kitchen cabinets. Sure,new ones would probably look better, but I enjoyed the work as well as theresults. Same thing with the diabetes. I’d love to be able to control my kids’diabetes myself; I’ve been able to refine my own basal rates pretty well. But for some reason, the kids always baffle me. Probably because thoseteenage hormones come around and mess everything up and what was working amonth ago no longer applies. Enter the endocrinologist and his team. Of course, they are more experienced. They’ve gone to school for it. They have oodles ofexperience. And they’re not as close to the situation as I am and can seethings I’ve overlooked. And I want the very best care for my children.

Same thing with a critique group. I write the best I can. Iedit, looking for adverbs, passive voice, and other gremlins in my writing. Then I hand my manuscript off to my critique group and they find plot holes, petwords, and grammar issues. Just like with the doctors’ offices, critiquepartners can bring me to tears (okay, so that hasn’t happened yet, but there’salways a bit of trepidation opening that file when it gets returned) but morethan that, they’re my greatest cheerleaders. Maybe I don’t follow their adviceperfectly all the time, but they’re there to congratulate my accomplishmentsand encourage me to continue improving. They see what I don’t.

So my thanks to my diabetes team, my critique group, myYoung Women’s counselors and advisors, my husband and kids, and all the othergroups who offer advice. I couldn’t do it without you!

2011-09-09T00:00:00.000-05:00

"My advice: stop dieting. Start eating. Start eating in a way that helps your body become the healthy, strong body that you want." --Jen Brewer

When I was first approached about reviewing a nonfiction book, I turned it down flat. Nonfiction? Boring. Diet book? Even worse. Even though I suppose I need it (I'm in the denial stage, don't mock me) I just don't read diet books. I know what I need to do, I just need to do it. But then I started to think about it. I hate the fact that there are so many diet books out there that just don't seem to be possible for a type 1 diabetic, and I admit, I kinda wanted this to be one of them so I could justify my weaknesses by pointing a finger and saying, "That doesn't work for everyone. It can't work for a type 1 diabetic."

Well, guess what? I was wrong. Jen Brewer's book All Diets Work: That's the Problem can work. For anyone. Even me. There were no bells and whistles, no easy fixes, not really even new information. In fact, the science is tried and true; this could be a health class textbook. It's more of a reference book than a new diet, as the author herself points out.

Though I didn't necessarily learn anything new, there were, however, a few tips I am looking forward to trying out--today: like the way to overcome sweet cravings (I won't tell you the secret, you'll have to read the book to find out what it is) and The Apple Test. If you'd like to find out what these are for yourself, you can purchase your copy here. Also, I suggest checking out the author's website for even more tips, recipes, and encouragement. And I hope this book gives you just the right kick in the pants to get going to a better you--just like it's done for me.

My Book Cover!

2011-09-05T08:33:00.002-05:00

Well, I listened to all your comments from my vote a few weeks ago, and tried to incorporate them. The cover that won was the runner on a photo background, but many liked the ideas behind the two runners (so did I) so I did a little combo: The runner remains on the front, but a "runner" in church clothes is also on the back. So let me know what you think and thanks to all who voted :)

Now for your help...if you like my book cover, please head on over to this blog contest and "like" my cover!

My First EVER Contest!!

2011-08-29T12:28:00.000-05:00

In conjunction with my review of Vickie Hall's All That Was Promised, I am running my first ever blog contest! All you have to do to win my copy of Vickie Hall's LDS historical novel is to comment either on this post or the review itself AND be a follower of my blog. That's it. Super easy! And I'll choose the winner on Tuesday, Sept. 6th. Happy reading & happy Monday to all of you!

Review: All That Was Promised

2011-08-29T00:00:00.001-05:00

All That Was Promised
In 1847 Wales young Methodist Minister Richard Kenyon converts to Mormonism. Richard's newfowund faith is put to the test as he faces down the anger of his former congregation, his wife's indecisiveness, the betrayal of his brother, and the murderous intentions of misinformed villagers.

My Take:
For all those fans of LDS historical fiction, here's another installment. Set among the background of 1840s Wales, Vickie Hall's new book tells the conversion of a Methodist minister to The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints. Early members of the Church experience healing miracles admist the horrors of mob violence, repentance and forgiveness despite familial jealousy and betrayal. It's a great Sunday afternoon read and a touching reminder of the blessings of the gospel in our lives made possible through our Savior Jesus Christ and the sacrifice of others brave enough to suffer for their faith.

Click here to order your copy of All That Was Promised, at Amazon.com. To learn more about the author, Vickie Hall, check out her website and her blog.

Review: Double Deceit

2011-08-15T00:00:00.003-05:00

I'm excited to be the first on this blog tour review Stephanie Humphreys' new LDS suspense novel, Double Deceit!

From the back cover:

Someone is watching . . .

As a young widow, all Elaina Bryant wants is a fresh start. Determined to put ten painful years behind her, she returns to her hometown and moves in with her sister, Natalie. Elaina soon accepts a job working at a small bookstore owned by the handsome Ryan Hill and his mother. Despite her reluctance to become romantically involved with anyone, she is drawn to Ryan and finds herself falling in love.

But someone isn’t happy with Elaina’s new life and is watching her every move. Her tormentor seems determined to destroy her sanity and her future, but Elaina can’t convince anyone the threat is real. Natalie is preoccupied with her own blossoming romance, and their friend Peter, a police officer, seems to believe the threat has been manufactured in Elaina’s own mind as a result of her guilt and grief.

Now Elaina’s plans for a new start are crashing down around her. She knows she will have to find the answers before she can overcome the past and enjoy love and happiness again. But how can she protect those she loves when she doesn’t know whom to trust?

My Thoughts:

When the book arrived at my house, I was in the middle of reading another book and didn't get to it right away. Instead, my fifteen-year-old daughter picked it up. I haven't seen her read much of anything other than over-the-summer homework and Facebook for the last few months and I was please to see her immersed in a book. What I liked was that I didn't have to worry if it would be appropriate for her, and when I read it, I wasn't disappointed. The only bad thing about letting my daughter read it was that she didn't want to stop reading to do her chores or help with dinner. "I'm at the good part," she'd say, no matter what page I asked. Then when she finished, she begged me to hurry and read it so we could talk about it without her spoiling the ending for me.

Double Deceit may not have kept me guessing the entire time--though I wasn't completely sure--but it did keep me intrigued. I appreciated the LDS culture without being preachy and the romance without being over-the-top sweet. I would definitely recommend it to friends.

You can buy your own copy of Double Deceit by Stephanie Humphreys at either Deseret Book or Amazon. To read more about the author or her first book, Finding Rose, Stephanie's author blog.

This link will take you straight to an awesome contest the author will be running through the first part of September! Check it out :)

Last Two Days to Vote!

2011-08-03T10:26:00.000-05:00

There are only two more days to vote for your favorite of my book covers or to suggest a totally new one. Right now, there's a tie, so I'd love a few more votes. Something to remember--it's got to look good thumbnail size as well.So please, vote, get your friends to vote, make comments and suggestions, and I'll let you know the results in a few days! Thanks, everyone!

2011-08-01T14:32:00.002-05:00

Author Tristi Pinkston is excited to announce the release of the third novel in her Secret Sisters Mysteries series.

Titled Hang ‘em High, this novel takes place on a dude ranch in Montana. When Ida Mae’s son invites her to come for a visit, of course she brings Arlette and Tansy along with her. They are expecting to spend the week looking at horses, avoiding the cows, and making amends in Ida Mae’s relationship with her son. What they don’t expect is to be stuck on the ranch in the middle of a blizzard and to be thrust headlong into the middle of a mystery.

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Help Tristi celebrate her new novel in two ways. First, come participate in the two-week-long blog contest, where you can win a book nearly every single day! All the details are up on Tristi’s blog.

Second, come to the book launch!

You are invited to an

August Authorama!

Saturday, August 13th

Pioneer Book, 858 S. State, Orem

12 – 4 pm

Games, prizes, balloons, face painting,

and Dutch oven cobbler

prepared by world champion cook

Keith Fisher.

Authors Tristi Pinkston, J. Lloyd Morgan, Cindy Hogan,

Nichole Giles, and Heather Justesen

will all be there to sign books.

This is one book launch event

you will not want to miss!

Your Opinion on My Book Cover

2011-07-29T23:00:00.000-05:00

I'm so excited to be this close to releasing my first novel, Nourish & Strengthen, which will come out some time this fall. At the moment, I have four potential book cover designs and I'd love some feedback.

Please take a look and comment with your ideas and opinions. Don't forget to take the poll at the right and let me know which is your favorite!

Thanks for your input and keep tuned for more info about the upcoming release of Nourish & Strengthen.

Review: "Sleight of Hand" by Deanne Blackhurst

2011-07-26T00:00:00.001-05:00

Synopsis: "When Daniel, a fifty-five-year-old con man, suffers a heart attack and dies, he meets his guardian angel, Jonah, on the other side. Jonah shows him to a beautiful cabin and tells him this will be his eternal home. Daniel is sure he was able to scam his way into heaven—he scammed everyone on earth, so why not heaven too? But as he spends time in his cabin, all alone, he realizes that he’s actually in a wasteland. Jonah presents him with a way to escape, but will Daniel want to pay the price for his freedom?"

Deanne Blackhurst's Sleight of Hand would make a very interesting book club selection. As far as speculative Christian fiction goes, I've never read anything quite like it. While the book tried hard to be nondenominational, there was enough controversial about it, that it could raise some good discussion. The idea that someone can try and con his way into heaven was intriguing, and I was curious how he'd try it.

Although I yearned for more of a reference to a Savior's role, Daniel's struggles in Wasteland made me really stop to think about how I might feel in the afterlife if I don't take the opportunity now, in mortal life, to apply the Atonement by repenting of sins and misdeeds. And that, I think, was the book's greatest strength--the ability to make one examine life and the way we treat others.

It was an interesting read--and the first I've ever read on my phone, which I greatly enjoyed--with something to think about.

To learn more about this book or the author's other books, visit Deanne Blackhurst's blog. Now through August 31st, you can order your copy of Sleight of Hand for the special price of $1.99.

Reviewed By ME!

2011-07-25T11:30:00.002-05:00

Over the next month, I'll be doing several reviews for the LDS market and I am totally looking forward to it! I LOVE reading what's coming out now. When I started writing LDS fiction, I had several people tell me, though somewhat reluctantly, that they don't read LDS fiction because "It's too predictable, formulaic, forced," etc., etc., etc. But I think they might have read some as a teenager and never gone back. There are stacks of good books out there and my hope is to get some of them noticed on my blog.

With so many reviews upcoming, I decided to make some decisions about how I would handle the process--so that I don't get confused and so readers know what to expect from me. My ground rules are as follows:

1. Yes, I do receive free copies (eBook or paperback) of some of the books I have reviewed or will review. Some, like Rebecca Talley's The UpSide of Down, I did on my own because I loved it! However, just because I receive a free copy, doesn't mean it's going to color my opinion. I'll give you the truth.

2. Writing and publishing a book is a phenomenal accomplishment and all authors deserve respect. I probably won't connect completely with each book (we all have our reading preferences), but that doesn't mean someone else won't love it. So I will point out the strengths as I see them. Also, I won't point out every flaw in the novel. I just won't. So just because I don't highlight it in an obnoxious hot-pink color for all the world to see, it doesn't mean I am missing all the typos, point of view shifts, etc. On the other hand, that's not to say I won't point out some :)

3. If I say I loved it, then I really did! And I hope I get the chance to say that about every book I review.

4. I will always post links to purchase the book. After all, if you like my review and want to read the book, isn't it nice to have it at your fingertips?

So--if any of you would like me to review your book for my blog, let me know and I'll fit you into my schedule. Also, I'd love to do author interviews as well, so if you'd like to be interviewed, leave a comment and I'll get back to you!

Happy reading! I know I will be.

Write What You Know

2011-07-02T06:09:00.000-05:00

Today's post is more of a question or two. See, I've always heard the advice to "write what you know." It makes sense to me. I love a well-researched novel and hate being yanked from the realism of a book only to find factual errors in the story. (Reading a national bestseller where there is one LDS missionary going door to door selling magazine subscriptions. Really?) I suppose a number of mistakes are going to happen. I've written my share, and recently someone in my critique group helped me catch something big before it ended up in print forever. But if you write what you know, won't you make fewer mistakes?

The thing is, I've also had people hear about my projects and seem to look down on it when they pick up on a similarity between author and the main character. For example, the protagonist in Nourish & Strengthen is diabetic. "Oh, it's autobiographical then," they comment with disappointment. Parts of it, I have to admit to myself, but it is a work of fiction. I've changed things. Most things. Plot, characters and motivations, situations. Some things I haven't fabricated, though--how it feels to pass out; the day-to-day mechanics of taking care of a chronic illness; the fear, loss, and guilt of dealing with a new diagnosis. And I think it is precisely these things that make a more believable and compelling story.

So my questions are these:

Readers--Do you look down on a novel when you know the author has personal experience with the main issues in the book?

Writers--Do you use real life in your fiction? How much?

Google--My New Best Friend

2011-06-13T21:44:00.000-05:00

No offense to my real BFFs, of course, but don't you just love how easy it is to find information on the Internet? No more need for files of junk or stacks of paper. No need to memorize how far the earth is from the sun or when Ohio became a state. Need to know something? Look it up!

And that's what I did when it came to needing recipes last week. We were having a potluck at church, complete with a cookie-baking contest. Not that my baking is by any means exemplary, but I thought it would be fun to try something new. It started with Almond Joy cookies. These were pretty good, but I needed to add a little more coconut and a little less almond (or maybe it was that the almonds were old and tasted funny). I think they could've been quite good, but by the end of the week, I was tired of them and decided to move on.

How about something chocolate? I like mint... These ended up being my kids' favorite and my daughter dubbed them "Maria's Minty Madness." But alas, I cannot take credit just for following a recipe (though they did win Most Original).

But my personal favorite? Cranberry cookies--but I also wanted it with chocolate and oatmeal...is there a recipe for that? Well, yes, there is! Google chocolate chip oatmeal cranberry cookies and you get something fantabulous! The judges thought so too, and I ended up with Most Tempting and Yummiest with that recipe.

Anyway, just thought I'd share. And in case you're wondering, no, I didn't try them with Splenda yet--most people at a potluck wouldn't like them that way--but I'll let you know! Happy baking! And THANK YOU to those who did the real work and shared their tasty recipes with the world!

Tourist, Super Woman...Or Running w/ Diabetes

2011-06-09T16:25:00.000-05:00

So I've got a problem. A fashion problem. I've begun training in earnest again (after a long cold-weather/ busy school year hiatus). This year I actually printed off the marathon training schedule (instead of the half), but we'll see when October comes which I end up running.

The thing is, as I go for longer and longer runs, I need to be able to track my blood sugar. I could just assume it's going low and eat but I'd rather not--it could go too high. But I also don't want to end up waiting until it's low enough for me to recognize it (by then I'm too tired to continue) and I don't have a CGM. So I'd like to take my glucometer and snack with me while I run. I already bought a Spibelt (see above) for just such a reason and love it. The problem arises that now I have a huge phone that I also need to carry. Although the Spibelt stretches enough for all, it bounces too much.

So my options are: two Spibelts or this other pouch. Either way, I'll look poochy and touristy. Which would look better? (By the way, the bulk of the pouch to the left goes under the shorts, but would be a might big bulge.) Don't forget that I also have an insulin pump clipped to my waistband, too, so the more I add, the stranger I look.

Are there any other options out there?

2011-06-07T16:21:00.000-05:00

We all have challenges and trials at various times in our lives, some more heart-wrenching than others. Often times when we hear of others' struggles, we yearn to help, but lacking a practical way to do so, we offer a prayer and move on. Author Cheri Chesley is providing an opportunity to assist. She explains:

My friend, Rebecca White, is 35 years old and has breast cancer. She got her diagnosis May 11th. She had a mastectomy May 13th. Rebecca is an amazing, strong person. She's so skilled in all those craft-type things that leave me with glue on my fingers and glitter in my hair. She has a happy marriage and three great kids age 10 and under. Rebecca could be me. She could be your sister, your friend, your mother. She could be you. You can meet her and get to know her on her blog.

In general terms, we know cancer can strike anyone at any time. It's not an old person's disease anymore. It strikes children, mothers; in short, anyone. Soon Rebecca will start her chemotherapy. We're all optimistic for a positive outcome, but cancer surgeries and treatments do not come cheaply. Since she won't let me shave my head, I've decided to show my support for Rebecca in other ways. This is more than taking her meals and taking her kids to and from church; I've done that. Anyone can do that, and they do. We have a supportive ward out here. But I wanted to take it a step further.

I'm donating all my book sales income through August 31st to help Rebecca and her family pay their medical expenses. This is something they need, and in order to make it the most effective I need all the help I can get. And this is why I'm appealing to everyone I can. My book sales don't just mean the royalties from selling print copies of The Peasant Queen (which, incidentally, is on LDS Living's Summer Reading List), but also all income from my two e-books--The Wild Queen and my short story, Ghost Bride.

It's so easy. All you have to do is purchase depending on your interests and ability to help. The Wild Queen and Ghost Bride can be found at Smashwords, which not only offers the e-books for every e-reader including simply your home computer, but also offers the highest revenues.

Printed copies of The Peasant Queen can be found, or ordered, at your local bookstores. You can also find it online at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and Borders. Amazon and Barnes and Noble also offer each book for the Kindle or Nook, respectively.

Thank you in advance for your help, and happy reading!

Dry Cleaning Disasters

2011-06-06T17:39:00.002-05:00

AHHH! The incompetence! So I've been out of town--at Young Women Camp having a ball whitewater rafting and hiking and orienteering and roasting in a tent. Anyway, in a way, I was almost disappointed to return to cell phone reception and air conditioning and running water (I suppose I couldn't rely on someone else fetch clean drinking water and ice indefinitely) because that meant I'd have to return to unfinished business...namely, the high school marching band uniforms left at the dry cleaner.

Weeks ago, months in fact, I began the process of getting the uniforms cleaned. Last year it wasn't so bad--yeah, it meant a few trips across town, my SUV loaded with stinky polyester, and more than a few hours in a portable inventorying, labeling, returning uniforms in preparation of August fittings. But it was all worth it when I saw the kiddos marching on the field.

So I thought it would be even easier this year. I knew what I was doing this time, after all. But no, the first dry cleaner I used refused to give me a finish date and I felt like I was being strung along, pushed behind every other customer who came in with one or two pieces rather than 80 at a time. After a few frustrating times, I called around, negotiated a similar rate and had a promise all the work would be done within a week (I should have known it was too good to be true) and I thought it would all be done well before the end of school.

Somehow they didn't stick to their original promise, but they assured me within the next two weeks for sure, and I returned from YW Camp naively believing at least half of the uniforms would be finished and waiting on me.

I called. NONE were ready. AND they said they wouldn't start them until another band came and picked up their uniforms (as if I had any control over other band boosters in West Texas). UGH. After a few phone calls and finally talking to the manager who feigned ignorance of my plight and issues that transpiring since she and I had made the arrangements so many weeks ago, she has promised me she'll have it done before I go on vacation.

And stupid me, I'm trusting her. Because she said all the right things and I'm a softie and I don't think all 182 pieces will fit in my van at once. And I'd have to find yet another dry cleaner. Am I crazy? Something about the definition of insanity comes to mind....

Umm...Thank You ((Blushing))

2011-05-25T09:01:00.002-05:00

Thank you, thank you so much for this award. I want to thank my pillow, and my running shoes, and chocolate. Yes, chocolate, you've gotten me through some really tough times. And I want to thank my air conditioning and soft grass, the grass soft enough to walk barefoot through--I wish you were here. And the idea of a stress-free day, though you are often elusive. I feel like I'm leaving someone out...yes, I also want to thank Rachmaninoff for Prelude in C Sharp Minor http://prostopleer.com/#/tracks/4765298j8Ff.

Now if I just had an award to receive...

Lunch with Phil Bildner

2011-05-23T12:19:00.001-05:00

Friday the PTA at my kid's elementary school did a really cool thing. In an effort to encourage reading, the PTA brought in author Phil Bildner to speak to the students and in my opinion, it was well worth the expense and effort (and tired feet from the woman who tried not to burn the popcorn all day). As an author of children's picture books and middle-grade chapter books, of course, he was speaking to the perfect audience; as a former schoolteacher, he was an engaging, if not energetic (he sure paced a lot!) speaker who kept their rapt attention for an hour at each presentation.

So why am I blogging about this, besides the obvious--that I love meeting any author who's "made it"and hope a little of that successful hard work and little bit of luck will wear off on me, too? Previously, the only author's presentations I've heard have been John Erickson (think Hank the Cowdog) who was last year's author for this same even, and now Phil's, so mentally, I'm taking notes. Because just maybe someday I'll get the opportunity to speak to groups about the writing and publishing process.

Some subjects he talked about were: the editing process, working with an illustrator, and his friend's dog. That was interesting--not everything related to his sports-themed books, but it was something his audience would appreciate (what elementary child doesn't like pictures of cute dogs). He used slideshows and videos (perfect, so I don't have to just stand up there and talk--boring). And he mentioned his writing group--yay for writing groups! In fact, that and New York were what he and I talked about most when I shared a table with him at lunch. By the way, who serves hamburgers without offering ketchup? He didn't complain, but I did.

I enjoyed meeting and listening to Phil Bildner and look forward to being able to travel to promote my own books sometime in the near future!!

Start/ Finish Line

2011-05-17T22:18:00.001-05:00

After the refreshment, encouragement, and revitalization I received at the LDStorymakers Writers Conference a couple of weeks ago, I find myself at the start/finish line of a few goals:

Finish--submitting my novel, Nourish and Strengthen, which means, for now, I am "done" with it. It also means I am back to working on my second novel (though not exactly a new start since I'm halfway through).

Finish--I finally reached my goal of running 100 miles! So I'm starting on the second hundred miles with the aim to reach that marker a little sooner than it took me last time.

Finish--As my children finish another school year, I find myself finishing obligations I've taken on such as PTA treasurer and band uniform chair. By the same token, it's also the starting line for other similar volunteer responsibilities, and I look forward to continuing to support my children in their endeavors.

So here I am at the starting line, revved up and ready to go! What goals are you starting on? I wish us both luck!

A Writing Water Station

2011-04-27T15:46:00.003-05:00

Just a few more yards (or days, in this situation) to the water station, I find myself thinking at times during a race.

Only this time, the upcoming water station is the LDStorymakers Writing Conference May 5-6. I am making my travel plans, polishing my pitch, printing my contact cards, planning my classes. I can't wait. I may not be on the brink of writing dehydration, but it's just as necessary to refuel creatively as it is to hydrate during a race--and this writing conference will be that for me.

My race isn't over yet--I still have some hard work ahead of me (I don't have that printed novel in my hand)--but sometimes it helps to reflect on how far I've come since the last water station (LDStorymaker's conference last year) and how stopping there vitally assisted my way.

So this year I am again looking forward to reaching the water station and extending a shaky hand to receive the offered aid of encouragement, knowledge, and networking so I can continue my race. And thanks to those who offer the cups!!

Finding My Zen

2011-04-13T15:20:00.001-05:00

I know it's cliche, and being cliche on a writing blog has got to be the number one "no-no." Nevertheless, this picture describes exactly how I feel right now. It's that time of year when my calendar is full of notes (so much so that I left the wrong kid at school the other day for a non-existent activity) that half of our family home evening involves scheduling. It's full of award ceremonies, concerts, and end-of-school activities as well as the usual church activities, PTA, and homework/ housework/ too-nice-to-be-stuck-indoors wanderlust.

The other day I had this mental image of me juggling and I was terrified that I might drop something. When I contemplated what I could eliminate from my life to simplify, I realized that each was necessary, important, or enjoyable. What I decided instead, was that it was okay if I dropped one momentarily, as long as I picked it back up again. There's no need to expect perfection, just my best effort, and the ability to enjoy the breeze created as my hands swirl with activity.

I still feel overwhelmed at times--especially now with a huge new church assignment and finalizing my manuscript for submission--but I want to be more like the woman in this picture: A look of peace on my face despite (or maybe because I am) juggling the most important aspects of my life.

Keep the Goal in Mind

2011-03-31T13:23:00.003-05:00

Saturday I ran my second ever 10K race. Even though I ran a half marathon in the fall, the 10K was a challenge for me. By the time I've trained for months for the half and then run the race, mentally, I need a break. And then it gets cold. So by the time the weather warms up in the spring and I want to run on a regular basis again, I almost have to start over. I wasn't anywhere near as ready as I would have liked to be, but I made it. Even had enough umph to sprint the last 100 yards or so, and placed third in my division (I must admit it's nice to live in a small town--less competition). Determining success, however, has less to do with comparing myself to someone else, it's reaching my small goals, the stepping stones that will get me to my bigger goal--staying healthy, controlling my diabetes (instead of letting it control me). It's pushing myself to be the best I can be.

Same thing with my writing. Yes, I'm still editing the same novel I've edited several times over the past few years. But every time it's getting better. I'm getting closer to getting it published (I hope), but it's also about honing my craft, improving, shaping the kind of writer I will be. If this novel never gets published, I've got other books in me I want to write. It's not unlike training for that half marathon--it's hard work over a long period of time, but even if I don't do as well as I want to in that particular race, there's always another race to work toward. So I'm near the end of yet another marathon training schedule and it's grueling, but it will be oh so worth it!

Blog Tour: Journey of Honor by Jaclyn M. Hawkes

2011-03-21T00:00:00.012-05:00

Synopsis: From the back of Journey of Honor by Jaclyn M. Hawkes:

Disowned, she came to America anyway. Attacked and left pregnant by a vicious mob, she still pressed on. Finally, in spite of being accused of theft by the vilest of her attackers, Giselle tries to remain as upbeat and uncomplaining as a prairie wildflower as she travels on to Zion.

Thoroughly disillusioned with the ugliness and cruelty of slavery in the South, Trace Grayson leaves his young medical career to go west, hoping to leave bigotry and hatred behind. He begins taking goods by teamster train to sell in the territories. However, this fourth time across, in July of 1848, he’s stuck in St. Joseph, Missouri, waiting for enough wagons to join the train so that they can leave.

Knowing that if they don’t start west soon, they’ll be caught by snow in the mountains, Trace is thrilled when the final wagon signs on. Then, when the beautiful, young Dutch girl traveling with the last wagon is falsely accused of stealing and is detained, the whole trip is jeopardized. Thrown together by circumstance, Trace and Giselle team up to begin to figure out just how to make this epic journey across a continent a success.

With a deep sense of honor and an equally strong sense of humor, together they learn to deal with everything except the one trial that neither of them can overcome.

What I Thought: Jaclyn M. Hawkes' Journey of Honor is first and foremost, a love story--a romance that happens to be set on a pioneer trek from St. Joseph, Missouri, across the prairie to Salt Lake City. Along the way, the wagon train encounters many of the expected trials: mob violence, natives, illness, weather. But the strength of this book lies in its characters.

It is the budding romance between Trace and Giselle that compelled me to turn the pages. Although I found it jarring at times when the point of view switched from one character to the other in the middle of a scene, it was nice to get a glimpse into both characters' thoughts and feelings. I thoroughly enjoyed Mose, Trace's best friend and adopted brother, but I have to admit, my favorite character was the native who pursued Giselle. The resolution between the three of them made me laugh out loud.

Without compromising the light, romantic feel of the book, the author touches on the difficult subjects of rape, slavery, blacks and the priesthood, and polygamy without dwelling on them. She is able to sow seeds of faith and hope rather than planting doubt or discouragement as I have experienced in other books in the past. It was a novel I felt comfortable allowing my teenage daughter to read.

Jaclyn M. Hawkes is a debut author who can tell an interesting tale, and I look forward to her next book.

To learn more about Jaclyn M. Hawkes, you can visit her website or check out her blog. Journey of Honor is available at Amazon.com in either paperback or Kindle.

The REAL Review: The Upside of Down

2011-03-11T10:51:00.001-06:00

I was having a conversation with some writing cohorts about reality in fiction--specifically if a real town should be named or a real business used. The consensus was that it depends on the kind of story. At the time, I had recently finished Rebecca Talley's lovely book, The Upside of Down, and to me, it was a perfect example of where real facts and places added to the story. While many people who read this book will never visit Farmington, NM, and while it's not exactly important to the plot, it does add a nice layer of reality. Having been in Farmington many times, I liked being able to picture the action exactly where it was happening, especially the very unique church building. But the book's reality didn't stop at the setting.

Women's fiction, as this book is, is about believable fiction with real-life situations and trials. I like the experience I gain learning about the trials someone else is going through without having to experience it firsthand. It gives me a small slice of understanding. I love a book, like this one, that lets me experience everyday life through humor and drama, but in the end uplifts and encourages me. Rebecca Talley does a beautiful job balancing these, while telling a fun and interesting story. Because not everything ends up the way the main character would like, it is believable. And it is a story that has been on my mind for over a month--which is saying a lot! I recommended it to my book club and now I'm recommending it to you: it is well worth the read. And no, she didn't pay me to say it or even give me a free book! It's just that good!

To read more about The Upside of Down, or the author, Rebecca Talley, or to purchase a copy of the book, head on over here: http://www.rebeccatalley.com/

-ly Words are Like Cinnamon

2011-03-04T10:38:00.002-06:00

How do you feel about oatmeal raisin cookies without the touch of cinnamon? Sure, they taste great, especially straight from the oven when they're warm and gooey. But what about oatmeal raisin cookies that include just the right amount of cinnamon? They're even better.

Lately, I've read several blogs decrying death to -ly words. Go to any writers' forum, conference, class, blog, you get the idea, there will be at least one person on a soapbox banning adverbs. On some level, I agree, if they're used redundantly. Too much cinnamon can kill a recipe. But just enough, can be the difference between bland and sensational.

So I set out to prove that -ly words are necessary. For emphasis. For clarity. For the subtle change in the meaning of a sentence. For example, John Steinbeck said, "I hold that a writer who does not passionately believe in the perfectibility of a man has no dedication nor any membership in literature." Wait...what was that...did Steinbeck use an -ly word? Gasp! And if you delete it, does it not change the meaning of the sentence?

But surely I wasn't overusing the spice rack. I have a manuscript I'd worked hard to rewrite and I'm about to resubmit, so I thought, "What can it hurt to do a search for "-ly" and make sure each was included for a specific reason." It started off fine, most absolutely needed to be there. As I went along I found a few I didn't need and deleted them. Do you want to know how many I ended up deleting? About 500!

Apparently my novel had too much cinnamon!

So You Want to Be a Writer: LDStorymakers Writers Conference

2011-02-23T13:23:00.001-06:00

So you want to be a writer? Me, too. Not just a writer, but a published one? Yep. Think you can do it alone? Probably not.

I thought I was doing all the right things: had an editor friend help me scrutinize every word of my ms. We sent it to about ten alpha readers for comments. I implemented their ideas, edited a little more, and sent it to publishers. That process has taken over a year (after the writing was "done"), and I'm still waiting.

If I hadn't attended the LDStorymakers Writers Conference last year, I might have gotten frustrated and abandoned my dream. At the conference, I was inspired, overwhelmed, reassured, and encouraged. I learned about aspects of writing and marketing I hadn't even considered (I wouldn't have started a blog). I discovered what LDS publishers are out there and what they are looking for. But what probably helped the most, is the online writing and critique groups I joined because of the conference. Their support and advice has been incredible.

So, in case you're on the fence about attending this years LDStorymakers Writers Conference, or wonder, as I did last year, if the travel & time was worth the trouble, here are some benefits of attending:

Hands-on classes
Networking
Being with other writers with high moral standards (clean writing)--no matter what genre you're interested in
Advice about ebooks, blogging, self-publishing
National & LDS agents to pitch your book to
National agents and published authors as teachers and speakers

I felt it was so beneficial, it wasn't even a question this year. The first week in May can't come soon enough!

If you are interested in learning more about the conference, including a list of the instructors/ agents and classes, click here: http://ldstorymakers.com/conference_2011.php

Is It Still Progress?

2011-02-17T12:01:00.001-06:00

I got on today to update my WIP meter. Not that I had much to add, but I do it at least weekly, or I'll forget and miss some small step in my process. Really, it was 2.5 measly miles toward running 100 miles. I should have done this last fall when I was preparing for the half marathon, because I could have added 30+ miles a week and met that goal within a month. But with the cold weather, I knew this would be a more realistic goal.

The thing is, this week the weather took a 180. Last week we were having school delayed for subzero windchills and this week it's in the 80s--right where I love it! But I've been so busy with so many other demands on my time, I haven't had the opportunity to enjoy the beautiful running weather. Instead I'm sewing skirts for a school skit (and they don't look so great--at least the kids will be onstage, so the mistakes should be almost invisible), serving on PTA and Booster boards (3 of them--what was I thinking?), serving in my calling, running taxi for the kids, working, trying to finish my first chapter for a contest, attempting to participate in the blogfest (which it didn't look like I connected it correctly--that's okay, I'm not a romance writer). All the things a mom does.

While I was coming home from a volunteer meeting one evening this week, I was thinking about my kids who'd had to cook their own dinner and hopefully get their homework done (a dream would be if they pracitced piano, too), I had to wonder...does what I'm doing to benefit the kids lose its meaning if it's taking me away from them? And am I really making any progress on the goals in my life if each step is a baby step?

Love at First Sight...Or Not So Much

2011-02-14T09:39:00.003-06:00

Today I'm participating in my very first blogfest! What is a blogfest you ask? Well, a group of us have decided to link together and all write about the same subject--and since it's Valentine's Day, you can guess, it is supposed to be a scene from our WIP where a couple meet for the first time. Since my book isn't so much of a romance, I had to do some tweaking but this is adapted from a scene in Nourish & Strengthen when the main character meets her future husband.

Enjoy, and take a look at the other blogs in the blogfest! And Happy Valentine's Day!

With my three o’clock communications class over, I gathered my dirty laundry in preparation for my weekly chore. My best friend Drew and I had arranged to study in the basement laundry facility while our clothes thumbed to cleanliness. Ready, I walked to his apartment and tapped on the door.

“Come in!” At least two baritone voices yelled.

I obeyed, expecting to see Drew, but finding instead two other men staring blankly at a television screen.

“Drew here?” I asked.

It was a full minute before they acknowledged my existence.

“He’s on the phone again,” Drew’s roommate, Bill, finally informed me. “He said to ask you to wait. By the way, you should tell him he needs to tip his secretary if he’s going to ask me to pass on his messages. Otherwise I might get confused and mess it up. A little bit of chocolate always helps keep my thoughts straight.”

“Since when?” The other man threw a couch pillow at Bill. “You don’t even like chocolate. Now some good home-cooking….”

I’d seen him briefly the week before, and asked Drew about him. He was Nathan, the newest roommate, the tall, dark, blue-eyed stereotype of a return missionary. Initially when I’d asked, Drew teased me, asking if I was interested in his receding hairline. But I thought he was cute, and he still had most of his hair. Now that I had a closer look, I was drawn to his quiet, casual nature. I scrambled to come up with a topic to start a conversation. To draw his attention from the television to me. I set my basket on the floor near the door and perched on the edge of the loveseat, uncomfortable and not knowing what to say.

After a distressing moment of silence, Nathan looked directly at me and my heart fluttered. “I’ve got a jar of cherries in the fridge.”

I was confused. “And?”

He turned back to the program, quiet for a moment. I thought he was ignoring me now. “You could make me a cherry pie.” He didn’t crack a smile or even look away from the TV.

Like I was sitting there because I had nothing better to do than wait on his every whim. Cook for him? Is that all he thought girls were good for?

“Only if you do my laundry,” I retorted, wishing I’d thought it through before blurting it out. It wasn’t exactly a fair trade—dumping a bunch of clothes into a washer to sit back and do nothing for a half-hour was much easier than baking a pie—especially from scratch. Besides that, there was no way I would let a strange man go through my laundry.

“Okay. Deal.” He jumped on that in a hurry, even looking away from the TV and into my eyes, quite serious. “Guess you’d better get baking.” The worst part was his tone of voice. He wasn’t even flirting, his face sober.

“You know I wasn’t serious.” I started to protest but was saved by Drew emerging with his own laundry.

“Ready?”

“Absolutely.” I walked out the door concentrating on avoiding looking in Nathan’s direction.

Drew and I stepped into the January air, our breath puffing miniature clouds.

“I take back anything I said about that Nathan guy. I’m definitely not interested.”

“You can’t just take away your interest like that,” Drew protested in feigned offense.

“Oh yes, I can. He’s a chauvinist pig.”

“I doubt that, Chloe.” Drew was serious again. “He likes to kid around. He was probably teasing you.”

“I don’t think so.”

Pep Talk or Trash Talk?

2011-01-29T12:51:00.002-06:00

For the third day in a row, I'm surviving a sore throat primarily by sucking on a throat lozenge constantly. My cough drop of choice is Halls Breezers because they're the least-medinciny, best-tasting sugar-free drop out there. But it wasn't until today that I read the tiny words printed on the individual wrapper. "Dust off and get up."

Really? Here I am, sick, and I purchased a product so I can feel better, but instead I get insulted? It's like going for a Band-Aid and finding "Aw! Did you get an itty-bitty boo-boo?" or "It's just a scratch!" printed on it. Or a bottle of ibuprofen saying, "Tough it out, you wimp!" or Pepto-Bismol saying "Did you have an upset tummy? Get your mommy to give you a hug."

Halls calls them "A pep talk in every drop," but I'm thinking they were written by the Hallmark card company rejects--all the sentimentality left out! Thanks for caring, Halls!

Writing Procrastination

2011-01-19T09:58:00.001-06:00

That title could have gone either way: "Writing Procrastination" or "Procrastination Writing." Both would fit. But why? Here's my problem. I am in charge of Young Women's New Beginnings (a meeting at church) tonight. I've worked hard to come up with a theme, put together cute take-home gifts, make assignments to the older girls, and get infomation on new girls to help them feel welcome.

All I need to do today is set up the room, decorate it (ugh) and write my talk (double ugh). I have some ideas on the talk--a couple of disjointed paragraphs--and yet here I sit, writing on a blog. I can't help but think about how much more fun it would be to be working on one of my novels: less pressure, for one. So it's easier to procrastinate writing by writing something else.

My hesitation can't be the fear of people hearing what I have to say, because this blog has the opportunity to reach more people than my talk tonight will, but maybe it's because my talk has the potential to reach people in a much deeper, more important way. I'm going to talk about seeking things that are "virtuous, lovely, of good report or praiseworthy" and I like the fact that that is what I'm trying to do in my writing as well. I am seeking, working, sweating, and stressing over writing a book that I hope will indeed be all of those things. But that's exactly what I need to encourage these wonderful, talented young women to do as well--make themselves the best they can be by choosing the best there is out there, and maybe even encourage them create a little of it along the way.

So back to writing--my talk, then my novels!

The Mystique of Women's Fiction

2011-01-15T22:18:00.001-06:00

Some of you poking around my blog (and by all means, please do) may come across the description "women's fiction" and wonder what that genre could be. Is it a Girls Only club? Is is fiction written by women, for women, no men allowed? Is it anything written with a woman as a main character?

I've done a little research so that I can explain it to those who ask. Most of my information comes from a class I attended at the LDStorymaker's writers' conference last year and a few blogs that I bounced around during the last few days.

So what differentiates women's fiction from romance, chick lit, or even general fiction? Here's some of what I found:

The main character IS a woman. She is usually over 30 and human--meaning she has flaws.
Relationships are the core of the plot, but not necessarily romance. There may be a man in the main character's life, but he's a smaller portion of the plot. Instead, the story is about family, friends, kids, career, health.
It deals with more serious topics than the more lighthearted chick lit. It's about the main character's troubles and how she plans to fix them. There will be a dark moment when she has her biggest doubts or loses everything, but then rebounds to the end.

On Writing-World.com, Micki Nuding, Senior Editor at Harper Collins/Avon, is quoted as saying, "The wider focus and the importance and variety and depth of the relationship portrayed [in women's fiction] really resonates with women today. Though there's not always a standard 'happy ending', there's a life-affirming resolution even if the story's somewhat tragic."

What do I like about reading women's fiction? Although I like a nice romantic comedy from time to time, I am happily married, so that's not really as interesting to me all the time. Sometimes it's nice to read about women dealing with some of the same issues I deal with every day--family, kids, spouse, health--and see how they deal with situations that are usually worse than my own. Then, when I'm done, I'm happy to have my own challenges and joys in life, and hopefully I've learned a little empathy along the way.

My Interview with Deirdra Eden Coppel

2011-01-02T09:31:00.001-06:00

What a great way to start a new year! Deirdra Eden Coppel has a great blog where she interviews authors, agents, editors and publishers and today she's featuring me. Deirdra interviewed me about my writing habits and goals and the process of finding a publisher for my first LDS women's novel, Nourish & Strengthen. So head on over to Deirdra's blog at http://www.astorybookworld.blogspot.com/ and then come back and let me know what you thought or any additional questions you have for me. Thanks!

Maria's To Do List for 2011 or Maybe Just This Week!

2010-12-31T12:34:00.001-06:00

I have never, and I mean never, been one to make New Year's goals. Sure, I want to improve. I have things I want to accomplish. And I know it takes little steps to get there--look at my quote on the sidebar if you don't think I already know that. But for some reason I just can't get myself to say "I'm setting a goal."

So instead I put things on my "To Do" list. Sometimes that objective stays on the list for months or even years. Sometimes it disappears without being checked off, but that doesn't mean I've given up or failed, that just means I decided something else was more important to work on that day. A list isn't as final or formal, it's just something I want or need to get done. A goal is...well, not.

I know it's all semantics, but don't tell me that. It's a little mind game I play with myself.

So in case you're wondering, here's a few things on my "To Do" list for 2011:

Get Nourish & Strengthen published.
Finish writing and editing novel number two and possibly number three.
Enjoy my children as they grow into amazing and successful adults (a several-yaer plan).
Run another half marathon and improve my time.

Ugh! That sounds too much like writing goals. They're not things I can scratch off in one day. Amazing children? Check. Half marathon--well, someday this year, check, but there's a lot of work I need to do to get there...and what if I get injured or decide I want to take up cycling instead?

Alright, revised "To Do" list for this week:

Direct all my friends and family to see my interview with Deirdra Eden Coppel on Jan. 2nd on http://www.astorybookworld.blogspot.com/
Email first chapter of Crossing the Wake (my second novel) to my critique group.
Write chapter 8 (and maybe more) of the same novel to keep ahead of critique group.
Get kids going on another semester of school.
Run at least three times this week.

See, now that's so much better. Just a good ol' "To Do" list!

Does Santa Need Insulin?

2010-12-28T09:34:00.003-06:00

Traditionally in my house--and I'm not sure how this started really because my kids never write the actual wish-list "Letter to Santa"--someone ends up leaving Santa a note with the cookies. Maybe it's in case he thinks they're set out for someone else and that he might offend the Tooth Fairy or the Easter Bunny. Maybe it is an explaination to help himself from the milk in the fridge so we don't have to leave it spoiling on the countertop and making milk rings in my glass.

So this year my son, a first-year type 1 diabetic, includes "I'm sorry we don't have any extra insulin for you." When he first said he was going to write that, it hurt my heart that it was even on his mind, but for him that's the reality: "Hand at the mouth, hand on the hip," meaning if you're eating, you better be pumping more insulin. I explained to him that Santa wasn't diabetic, that magic people wouldn't be diabetic, and he said then he would ask Santa to make us not diabetic anymore. Don't I wish. I know it stinks for a kid, for an adult, especially at Christmas.

After our talk about the note, I figured any discussion of the state of the pancreas, either Santa's or anyone else's, was no longer on the little guy's mind, but there it was, in ink, in black-and-white so to speak, just before he ended the note. Now my son is old enough to know the real secrets of Santa, he is in fifth grade, and maybe that's why he included the apology, but if that were true, wouldn't he have worded it differently? He knew there was plenty of insulin for both his parents as well as for him and his sister. But how skewed is his view of the world that he thinks he'd better leave insulin with cookies?

Just picturing a syringe full of insulin lying next to a plate of cookies and glass of milk changes the whole thing, doesn't it? But don't feel sorry for my son; in all honestly, it was either a joke, which I didn't sense at the time, or just him coming to grips with the reality of his new life--a life that is just as rich and happy as any other kid on Christmas Eve.

LDStorymaker's Writer's Conference

2010-12-17T15:33:00.001-06:00

It may be months away, but I am like a kid on Christmas Eve. I just reserved my spot at the LDStorymaker's Writing Conference in Salt Lake City in May. Last year was my first time ever and it was absolutely fantastic. I learned a bunch, laughed a lot, browsed more LDS books than I'd seen in forever (remember, I'm from Texas and far from and LDS bookstore), and mingled with writers like me (published and working on it). In short, it was heaven!

This year will be even better because I'll be able to meet some of the people I've gotten to know over email and blogs and continue to hone my craft. As always, they've got national agents looking for new clients and talented editors, agents, and published authors to teach the classes. I can't wait! But since I have to, I guess it's back to work so I have next novel ready for the conference. I hope to see you there!

If anyone is interested in learning more about the writer's conference, check it out at http://www.ldstorymakers.com/conference_2011.php

Submission: And the Waiting Begins

2010-12-08T15:03:00.001-06:00

So I did it! Today I printed out a ream of paper (not blank, don't you worry), packaged it up, stood in line at the post office (no, they didn't ask to see my picture ID) and mailed off two copies of my novel, Nourish & Strengthen, to publishers! What a relief, in a way, to have it off my shoulders and out there for someone else to worry about for a while. Instead I can think about Christmas cards and gift buying and band concerts and school parties and working on the other book I so unceremoniously abandoned over the past month and a half, probably smack in the middle of a conversation I won't even be able to remember between two characters waiting for me to aid them in finishing something very important, I am sure.

Part of me wonders if I should have held onto my manuscript a few weeks longer since most likely no one will even look at it before Christmas and every time I look at it, I can find a few words to tweak here or there. But I have to remind myself that it has been through three major edits, ten readers (thank you, thank you, thank you so much) who talked me into embarking on two more edits. It's time. Time to release it into the sky, hoping it will give someone else the joy that it's given me.

So to you alpha readers of mine that I have never met (thank you, Tom, for arranging them), keep your fingers crossed that your suggestions and guidance steered me in the right direction and maybe someday you'll find a signed copy of Nourish & Strengthen in your mailbox (or even better, see it on a bookstore shelf) and know that you helped it getting it there!

Wish me luck! (And now back to work on book two.)

Running Through Christmas

2010-12-04T20:11:00.002-06:00

‘Tis the season…for running at night. So, I’m a wimp. The proof is this: I refuse to run under 45 degrees. In fact, if possible, I wait until it is at least 55 degrees. I get up and take the kids to school and because I don’t want to breathe in cold air and make my lungs burn (worse than they would already, anyway), I mess up my day’s entire schedule by thinking, “I’ll do it later when it warms up.” So then I get busy writing and working and being a mom and all of the sudden it’s seven o’clock before I’m finally ready to go…and it’s pitch black, and starting to get cold again.

But I can’t let that stop me. So I layer my clothes, grab a flashlight in one hand and pepper spray in the other, and head out. I run in pretty safe neighborhoods, and all, but you never know what’ll happen in the dark. Still, I’m pretty sure I’m going to blind myself one way or another.

December isn’t too bad, though, especially after this week because it was warm and everyone strung their Christmas lights. Now I can run, weaving through neighborhood streets, my way lit by the beautiful Christmas lights I enjoy while I run. So I will enjoy my December evenings and upper-forty-degree weather and be thankful I can run through Christmas.

Making Friends in Blogland!

2010-11-22T20:19:00.002-06:00

This whole blogging thing is so much fun! And it makes me feel like I'm working on my writing when I'm really not. One of the things I like the most about blogging is making new friends (better known as networking) and learning from others (continuing education), and boy, do I have a lot to learn! I can spend all day (and sometimes do when I'm procrastinating doing something difficult like working on a query letter or plot summary) looking at the blogs of my new friends and I wonder how they create such cute blogs or how they have so much time to crank out their prolific, insightful posts.
One such person is someone I'm completely in awe of. Tristi Pinkston has been blogging since 2006. On her main blog, (http://www.tristipinkston.blogspot.com) she covers everything from writing tips and the life of a published author to kid funnies, spiritual thoughts, and embarrassing moments. She also has a weight loss blog, one for writing challenges, another for her fictional characters … and she lost count of how many others she has. You can find the links for them on her sidebar.
Tristi is the author of five published novels, one coming out in January, and a whole kit 'n caboodle of unpublished novels. Right now she's focusing on cozy mysteries, although she has written historical fiction in the past and plans to write more in that genre. She works as a freelance editor and a virtual book tour coordinator. She loves taking long naps, being charmingly annoying, and watching good movies. She's a Mormon, a homeschooler, a Cubmaster, and most of the time, a headless chicken.
She's a talented writer and amazingly creative—check out her Thanksgiving-themed blog backgrounds and get a taste of her writing!

Harry Potter 7 and Knowing Your Audience

2010-11-19T22:49:00.003-06:00

I am one of the thousands who read The Sorcerer's Stone aloud to early elementary and preschool children and then dressed them up as Harry, Hermione, and Ron for library parties and book releasing at Barnes & Noble. I am one of the millions who has read every one of the Harry Potter books, most of them within twenty-four hours of their release. I am one who has watched, multiple times, every Harry Potter movie in the theater and on DVDs I've purchased. My family owns much of the merchandise—games, costumes, cards, Legos—all marketed to children, I might add. Last I knew, the Harry Potter franchise has made copious money off of a fantastic, unique, amazing idea and superb writing.
So why did the movie producers push the envelope? In the Horcrux scene a fully-clothed and kissing Harry and Hermione would have made Ron sufficiently jealous—remember, he was jealous when they were just laughing and getting along together—without launching into licentiousness. In the book it is simply "wrapping…in a close embrace: Their lips met." I realize these are Riddle versions of Harry and Hermione and Riddle is evil, but there's nothing to base the movie's version of the vision.
Some might say I am overreacting, but I feel the movie makers have betrayed a trust I can't easily give back. Some might say I'm too strict, too prudish, but I'm not sure that's the relevant question at this point. If the books and movies were such a success, what did they hope to gain by adding the inappropriate scenes? In my mind, they've lost on this one instead of gained.
As a writer, or in this case a movie producer, there is a responsibility to the reader or viewer and the producers of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Part I took advantage of and abused the viewers and I, for one, am greatly disappointed.

Cheering From the Sidelines

2010-11-08T11:03:00.002-06:00

My heart and head pound in syncopation with my feet on the pavement. My lungs won't inflate completely, my muscles are exhausted, and I'm beginning to think I started at too fast a pace. I can't keep up and I'm spent. I'm only 80% of the way through a race and I contemplate picking a side street, ripping off my race number, and pretending I never started. Or maybe walking just a few steps, since no one is around to know.

Then I round a bend and find a small cache of spectators who, although I'm a total stranger and the only one around, cheer exuberantly. They offer a smile, encouragement, energy to bridge me over until I reach the finish line staging area where plenty of eyes will be on me, expecting me to give my all. Of course I wouldn't give up the family and friends who send me off and welcome me back at the start and finish lines, but it that small group, randomly placed, also make a difference in my race. And they probably have no idea how important they are.

My writing journey seems to be quite similar. I have so appreciated those who continue to cheer for me as I refine, rewrite and submit my novel. There have been many friends and family who've done that and more for me, but it's also those random strangers who probably don't realize they have so much influence, my on-line writer friends. And now I want to do the same for them.

Although I signed up for NaNoWriMo this year for the first time, I have yet to write a word for it. I've written plenty of words in the past week, and eliminated even more, but none on the new novel I was supposed to be writing in a month. So this year, I watch NaNo from the sidelines and cheer on my AI friends! Keep it up! You can do it!

What to GU with a MiniMed Insulin Pump

2010-11-01T14:17:00.004-05:00

My question today is to GU or not to GU? And similarly, if you're a diabetic on an insulin pump, do you run long distances with your pump or without it?
When my son was put on an insulin pump earlier this year, his endocrinologist suggested that he remove the pump while participating in sports. After further inquiry, I decided maybe I ought to try that on my runs, especially on the longer distances. I'd been having trouble with lows three or four miles into the run, ate something (usually fruit snacks) and then checked my blood sugar after the run, usually finding it within normal range. The problem came an hour or two later when my blood sugar seemed to skyrocket.
So lately I've been running without the pump, but I've also been careful to start out at a slightly high BG before running (or eat something before leaving), still having a snack during the run depending on the number of miles, and I haven't been having as many high readings after the run. The problem then becomes when and how much to eat during the run and what about the lack of insulin for two hours or longer?
Recently I completed my second half-marathon. The first was a year ago. I wore my pump with the full basal rate, ate fruit snacks every three miles and ended with a reading of 115 (just about perfect!) only to have it go over 300 a couple hours later. This year, I ran without the pump, had a GU at 5 and another at 9 miles and ended within three minutes of the previous years' time, but feeling much worse and with a BG of 192 which then came down nicely when I bloused and resumed insulin.
Therefore, my question stands—what do other diabetic runners do to reach that optimal balance? Perhaps 40-50% of the basal rate and fewer carbs—maybe only one GU per race?

Writing, Running, and Diabetes Numbers

2010-11-01T10:17:00.003-05:00

For weeks, I've had numbers swirling around in my head, and for a writer, that's not necessarily good news. Under 100,000 words. 6.3. 13.1 miles. 50,000 words in 30 days.
I decided to start this blog for many reasons, but actually sending off my first words has been the scariest part. I had no problem writing the 100,000 words to tell my story in a novel. Sure, it was work. It took hours of outlining, rearranging, writing, rewriting, editing, feedback, and more rewriting, but compared to the cover letter and synopsis, it was a breeze. Even cutting out a couple of thousand words isn't as hard as writing that first introduction of myself and my work. And that's where I am presently—preparing to send off my baby to potential publishers. To keep my mind off that stress, I've maniacally signed up to write 50,000 words in 30 days in National Novel Writing Month. I doubt I'll even come close since this happens to be the time I'm starting this blog and sending off my manuscript, but it doesn't hurt to try.
As for the 6.3, that's my most recent hemoglobin a1-C, a blood test showing a diabetic patient's average blood sugar over the previous two or three months. Though I don't know everything about it, I do know the magic number to beat is 7.0, so I was quite pleased. Now, if that were the only diabetes-related number I needed to worry about, that'd be great, but then there are the individual blood sugar readings throughout the day to regulate my carbohydrates and insulin. Then multiply that by three, because there are three more type-one diabetics in my household. My husband I don't need to worry about too much, he takes care of himself, but two of my children require education and cheerleading, cajoling and prodding to keep their numbers where they need to be, especially with Halloween this past weekend.
Part of the reason my last hemoglobin a1-C was so low was all the running I've been doing. This fall, I decided to run my second half-marathon ever. I got on runnersworld. com and printed off a training schedule, followed it almost religiously, and felt ready for my half. Preparation involved all kinds of numbers—a certain number of miles per day, time, and pace. My goal this year was not only to finish, but also to beat my last year's time of 1:59. Running for two hours straight is a bit of a challenge, too, but a great time to relax, plan my writing for the day, relieve stress. So that's why I will continue to run now that that race is over—maybe not as many miles as when I was training for a half-marathon, but enough to help me stay healthy and under that 7.0 and help me reach my other writing, running, and diabetes goals.
Now I'm off to do the taxes for PTA…will the numbers ever end?